that was an amazingly awesome book!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

that was an amazingly awesome book!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

is absolutely amazing. You knew how to capture my attention from the start and explain the characters to where I couldn't not like them. I especially loved Lailani; she was feisty, and I'm sure you know that I love women characters to be feisty--no going down without a fight--haha. At some points, I wanted to strangle Morgan. (lol) But, I still loved him as a character none-the-less. :D

You have good grammar, besides some minor glitches, but it's just some tense changes and a couple other areas. And believe me, I know how hard it is to get grammar right. In fact, my own stories have a bunch of grammar issues with commas and such. It's hard to revise and edit it by yourself, so you should just have someone look it over and help you there.

I LOVED THIS BOOK! It was fantastic! Please tell me when you decide to write another book. I want to be the first to read it. :))

I enjoyed this book sooo much. When I started, I just couldn't stop. Keep me posted if you add more :)

this is awesome, please hurry up in uploading.

Thanks for the comments. I am writing more as I type this. I will be adding more before the weekend is over. Check back, any suggestions. I'm all ears. L.L.

GREAT BOOK CANT WAIT TO READ MORE