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updateyou add a chapter :)
really good
Review - You have definitely improved the story. Plus added more. The story moved nicely through the wedding scene. Nice job. Robynn
book is great cant wait for more of their story
i tried to read but it skipped from the end of chapter one to chapter 6
dude it was just getting good!!! finsih
OMG I LURRVVV IT, so far!!!1 plezzz write moree!! :D
I loved IT, I cant wait for the update its awsome im gonna read the other one soon :) I really hope I hear from you soon about a update!
At first, I did think, oh no, another werewolve story. But I was pleasantly surprised. I really liked how you set up traditions, pack laws, the order. You did a nice job setting up the tension between the two at the first. I found your writing easy to read, and well constructed. My only suggestion is giving some back story or reasons why Jakov would kidnap her. Outside of that, great beginning. I will check back to see where... mehr anzeigen