it's a gr8 start carry on i can't wait see wat happens next

What happened to the old version? I liked that one better. I mean this is good but the other was better.......So what happened to it?

U are talented, u should write more books

It's sooo good, can't wait till next chapter.

Plz finish it!!! It's really good!!! I don't want to be kept hangin. lol:P

finish it please

MORE?! please :) and thank you :) you the best too, btw I added a little more to my story. It's not worth reading, and it posted on my other account x1dmugglefan. you don't have to read it atm though :)x

beautiful!

thanks again, ur the best x1dmugglefan

Just started reading it :) I love it. Btw, can't believe someone could be so rude and do what you sent me via private message. Not on. She is just jealous at how popular this story is and how brilliant it is written! x