FINISH!!!!

Please keep writing!!! your doing so well so far!

the book was good pls write more

Write more please!!!!! You cant leave it like that is getting so good

Please write more. It's soo good!!!

Ummm you stopped it why did you stop it i mean like honestly like come on who was on the phone you can't just stop it it's like pausing a movie at the most intense spot and that what you did

GOOD TOPIC PL WRITE MORE ITS INTERESTING

nice book continue and i will love to see the end

I wrote the second chapter.
I hope you will like it.
Thanks for your comments

this is very good you should contiune writing the rest and i hope you finish the book soon =)