My vote.

Voted.

Had to come back to vote! :D

But I see, by the comments, that you added some changes to the story. Let you know something soon.

came to vote, not that you need it. XD it really is a great piece and if anyone's going to beat me, I would want it to be you.

Where's Chino?
Find the sexy asian!
:3

~Edan <3

One of the best stories in the competition. Voted!

I loved this story, the mystery of where Chino might be and the culture , you got my vote. Wow, will all the stories for the young writers be this well written, if so I'm going to have a wonderful time reading. I wish you luck!

my heart melted for chino..:)good job

Often I start reading books from people on Bookrix, but then lose my interest after a few pages. I started reading Geta a few days ago, and didnt finish. This time however i felt the need to go back and find out what happened with Chino. So from the start on you keep the reader excited for more. Overall your writing style is very descriptive, captivating and emotional. I think you already added alot so there was hardly anything to find that you could improve. All in all a great short story !