as Laz said, nothing I would change. Jack summed it up. :)
~L
~Spread your wings~

I can't add too more than my friend Jack. It is concise, well written and makes you ponder. There is nothing I would change or add.
Laz

Angely,

Beautifully done, an alcoholic torn between the intoxicating effects of a bottle of liquor to the intoxicating effect a beautiful woman can have. I will read some of your other work
Jack