Lovely, just lovely.

I kept wondering which one would be the Zombie. Now that was sweet, and cute and funny.

Ah! Teenage love.....ain't it scary....LOL!!!

I like it a lot. Thanks.

I like it. And I agree... why do vampires and werewolves get all the action? Zombies DO need some love! :D

This is great so far. It is the first funny fiction book I've read and I liked it. Hope you continue with your story.

What a total hoot! I love the matter-of-fact tone of the story, the way these two live in their world with pretty much the same attitudes and problems as "normal" young people! This is both hilarious and brilliant - thank you!

Well done . You gave me a good laugh.

I honestly did not see a zombie vampire coming from you. But I love that you decided to do this story. It was a pretty unique take on the whole supernatural aspect of literature these days. And I enjoyed how you did not out right present the two lovers as a zombie and a vampire, but just added slow details that eventually lead to the conclusion as to what they were.
As usual, another great piece :D
-Angely