You're a really good writer!(:

also a nightbird tonight, huh?

thank you for accepting me!

Been working on my entry for the Science Fiction Short story contest. I appreciate your help with the editing. You probably won't recognize it now.

At any rate. I was wondering if you would dake a quick look at the "Blurb" and tell me what you think.

The year is 2020. John Wise is an inverter with a new idea. The only trouble is he can't get anyone to look at his invention. That is not until he mentions that he has been working with Lazarus Jones, one of the top robotics engineers in the country.

But that only gets him in the front door. He still has to sell his idea to the tough minded Mr. Kendrick, a hard nosed CEO whose only priority is the bottom line.

Jones had told John to drop the project, but he is determined to get his work recognized.

Here is the link to the story if you want to read it and comment.

http://www.bookrix.com/_ebook-ken-rodenberger-when-the-ants-go-marching/

http://www.amazon.com/Harvest-Time-Sheldons-Blueberry-Farm/dp/0615849555/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&qid=1374787052&sr=8-1&keywords=Harvest+Time+at+Sheldon%27s+Blueberry+Farm

thanks for the 'heart,' mister!

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Thank you, I'm glad you found 'Abducted' creative. I'm curious to know what the judges said, but I know it's asking too much :).

Oh my word, your page is very nice.

You're welcome Mr. Laird, it was my pleasure to read and review those anyhow c:

A Four Minutes novel would be an interesting endeavour, I would assume it would include more concerning Norman's past murders and life, since you killed him off in the short story.

Aww, I really appreciate those words, thanks.

I really like your writing style, very fluid and descriptive. You have the perfect balance of show and tell in your written work....

I like stories that have an air of despair in the plot, like in Turn Around When Possible, Four Minutes and perhaps The Camera (I read it, but was too tired to review).

I tend to enjoy writing in that general area, when I'm not stuck in a two year bout of writer's block. Gah :c

Eh, I'm starting to ramble, aren't I?

Ok I will.