Can you PLEASSSSSE UPDATE THIS BOOK PLEASE

that was truly beautiful

Can U Pretty Please Update Less Than Perfect

plzzzzzzzzzzz update

plz update soon

Plz update

Oh. My. Gosh. Plz update!!

Please update

I liked the book a lot but I think that you repeat yourself too much on the same scene where you could have used for a next scenario. Good though I really like it.

So, the book had good moments. It had a swag to it which I don't encounter often. Unfortunately I felt, a little cheated to be honest. Not because the book was unfinished but because I felt like you were leading me up to something bit the way you wrote it left much to be desired. There were grammatical errors and you were repetitive in the wrong places. You need more depth to your characters and more attention to detail. This has the potential to be a page turner, it just needs a few tweaks. Thank you for allowing me to read this and I hope I didn't offend you in any way.