Hey, Leesia8DSorry for spoiling all this positive feedback. I liked the book at first, especially ur choice of words. I wasnt surprised by the idea of main characters relationships. 50% of teenage books cant be expressed more than in one sentence " I meant I hated this guy, but he was so hot..."But then I saw that there's no some thoroughly planned plot; no matter I continued to read. Finally, I was disgusted by their sex... mehr anzeigen
Hey, Leesia8DSorry for spoiling all this positive feedback. I liked the book at first, especially ur choice of words. I wasnt surprised by the idea of main characters relationships. 50% of teenage books cant be expressed more than in one sentence " I meant I hated this guy, but he was so hot..."But then I saw that there's no some thoroughly planned plot; no matter I continued to read. Finally, I was disgusted by their sex scene and gave it up. (They were like 18 or less and not married,right? What killed me the most was parents awkward reaction to it. Not true-to-life really.) You have vivid imagination and quite a potential for creating much more beautiful characters and plots)) Good luck and sorry once more))
Aha thank you for the suggestion but honestly it's just too hard to get myself to write anything nowadays :(