I loved this! & I seriously think it was Alex because Derek is "supposed" to be knocked out right?:)
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I loved this! & I seriously think it was Alex because Derek is "supposed" to be knocked out right?:)
Please message me when you update.
i think it will be alex.
cant wait to read more!! :)
can you please message me when you have updated <3
I'd guess its alex but it could easily be Derek
plz plz plz finish this book so hurry i need to know what happens next the book is just so awesome so keep up the good work and keep me updated and plz hurry with that cuz i need to read some more thanx now hurry lol
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OMG good book, please write more. and i think her defender is derek because he is her best friend and i think he is starting to get feelings for her
I just wanted to inform you all that Derek Parker won't be appearing in a few chapters or so. It is all about our new hottie Alex Hernandez now. Sorry to all Derek fans though (If there are any...). But I promise you that you'll fall in love with Alex. The chemistry between Alex and Cassie is going to leave you all speechless.I can't wait to continue this book and share it with you guys! :D xxx
Review - You have a grasp of unrequited teenage love. Derek is totally unaware as most males are. You create a good scene where he is practicing his date invitation with Cassie. You introduce an unknown factor and create a lot of questions quickly. Good opening. Few grammar problems, but otherwise, nice beginning. Good job. Robynn
Wow. thats REALLY good!! you could use some grammtical help but for the most part its good! as for the story line, i really love it and i think its either alex or derek. Alex becasue he seems to know chelsea best, notice his use of her nickname, and derek becuase he would know her well enough...as for the gasping, only alex could cause that..unless derek has been changed in some HUUGE way!
and why was derek attacked? what... mehr anzeigen