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mimo_10

Love your book, I just wanted to know if you were going to keeping adding to it? If you do update can you PLEASE message me?!

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akougl23

I've been updating this book. Only through Chapter 5. I'l be adding more soon though so that you and others can read more about Terra.

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keara

PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASELEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASELEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASELEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASELEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASELEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASELEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASELEASEPLEASE write moe!!!! I'll be ur best fan!!!!!

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akougl23

lol thanks! :)

keara

np its awsome!

akougl23

I'll try to keep it up better than i have :) And thanks again for enjoying my world <3

keara

np!

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nashambi

the story is so interesting can you please make a part 2. i was actually laughing my ass off; my aunty is here looking at me in a weird way.

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littlebit06914

pkz finish good book ...........

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akougl23

Nope! I take whatever criticism I can get. If you don't like it, that's cool too. :) it's just easier to start out with something that most people like, to get better at writing. At least for me anyway. Thanks for commenting though!

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Gelöschter User

I like how mature you took this, your book is great, and she can't say anything unless she can write a better book :)

Gelöschter User

I agree with your comment. True, there are many stories like this, but this is yours, said in your words. As for the writing, it's very good and the story moves forward smoothly. Well done.

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Oh, and update it. i wanna know what happened. (>‿♥)

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twilight.shit

how many books are out there about the hottes chick ever living with her brother and his incredibly hot friends! seriously wtf? THINK OF SOMETHING NEW!
twilight.shit
aka Lizzie andy problems with this comment send me a note or shout at me for critiasm yada yada yada

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Gelöschter User

This is rude have you ever heard of the saying 'If you don't have anything nice to say about something you shouldn't say anything at all' well if you haven't there you go and unless you can write a better book than this you are better of keeping your mouth shut...

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jennkim123

Plz plz plz plz finish this book and hurry and keep me updated thanx
XD

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seastarpwn

i was wondering if this was just me, but does it seem like they could be werewolves?or some other supernatural creature?

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sakurahimesama

hey.. well i got a word for ya... MORE

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iloveyou143

ADD MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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