This is a great book. I love how u introduce the characters. Can't wait until there's more: )

thanks for the stars :)
i'm actually surprised you guys liked it since i was just 15 when i wrote it but all of you have given me an extra boost to write more and i will morgan102
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that was very good. keep up the good work!!! tell me when you update it please. :)

thank you for that comment and yes -i really suck at editing :( but i appreciate your advice i will be working on it -people tend to say that its my tenses that gets me down the most and this book i tried to keep it at one tense. i'll re-look at the book and make changes. thank you again for your star
Shia xx

So I will be brutally honest with you. I'm not a fan of horror, nor of vampires and werewolves, but girl, this is a good story. Excellent hook, good character building, very interesting and attention grabbing. I like this. I don't mind a foul word here or there in a conversation, unfortunately that's life nowadays. Of course, I say this gently, you need editing in the usual areas, but this is nice. If you wrote this at 15 I can hardly wait to see how you mature into your writing. Write on, would love to read more. If you want help in editing, (grammar, spelling, punctuation, and sentence) I would be willing to help. Very good job. Robynn

thank you
shia xx