Started reading....had to stop...way too much swearing. Probably a good story, but I'll never know...sorry.

thank you for your thoughts and yes i did mean flaunt not fluent -thanks for pointing that out and thanks for taking the time to comment :)

Your story line is strong, action good, characters sturdy and well defined. Your spell check does the same as mine, fluent is a word, it is spelled right, it means to flow, but I think you wanted 'flaunt' which means to show off. I know that now days language can be coarse and that's acceptable, but I found it hard to read. Just my own personal thing, but outside of that for me as a reader, this is going to be a fast paced story. Thank you! Robynn