Hi Aditi,
The book was Exceptional!
Very thought provoking, your format, concept, and design were done very well.
I enjoyed it from the beginning to the end. I will rate your book and save as my favorite.

Linda B

friends forever (earthquake)

I am really glad that you liked it.

I enjoyed this story and the wonderful way that it was told. I would have liked to read more because I like your writing style. The story seemed to be so personal, as if I was actually in that classroom listening to the story. Within this story there is a lesson for everyone and I thank you for sharing!

God bless,

Tyrone

Well Adita....Good story.....

Thanks a lot for reading my story....I am really happy that you liked it..

Read this story earlier and was so charmed by the friendship that developed between the two boys, one beginning the bully path, the other a wonderful role model. Though it is too bad they weren't able to share life, that is the way of Natural Disasters, isn't it? Your characters were well developed and the message was a good reminder of friendship. Thank you so much for sharing this story! Warmly, C...

moved me so, Aditi! Your characters were developed well, and such a lovely fable!

Good luck, Aditi! Petra :))

Hi Aditi,

I liked your story, like a fable, your teacher told it to her students and the ending was perfect. Good work.

Some minor errors I picked up (we all do these from time to time).

pg 6 - starred should be stared.
pg 12 - last paragraph felling should be feeling.
pg 14 - last paragraph, was should be were.

Bek

Sometimes a story comes along that holds you till the final sentence. This was one of those remarkable stories. Thank you
Charlie......
I'm proud to list it on my favorites.