21 DOPE STREET
by Kagelynn Isom

 

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Diane Freund
Suzanne La Rose Herlihy
Michelle Elizabeth
　
　
　
　
　
　
　
　
　
　
　
　
　
　
　
　
　
　
　
　
　
　
　
　
　
　
　
KAGELYNN ISOM
1-360-430-7164
Themovie21dopestreet@gmail.com
ON WHITE:

VOICE OVER:

“heres a story about a group of freinds that even though they have difernt ways they each live there lifes... they always seem to have each others backs … the comes along a savierTHEN COMES ALONG THE STONERS TAIL,THE STONER that wrote the very words your hearing now…THE ANSWER IN MY HEAD WONDERS AS YOU WONDER WHAT THOSE WORDS MAY BE, how does the story go, the words that will set you free... with weeed”
FADE IN TO WEED LETTERS:
“ONE HEART TWO HEARTS MAY FOLLOW YOU NOW BUT THE ONE AND ONLY IS 23 AGED… THE TIME THAT YOU ARE NOW ENTERING IS AROUND 1983…“
“THE FOLLOWING IS A TRUE STORY”
FADE IN:
EX. CLOSE-UP
Some long weed lighting. Over 5 sec’s
ON BLACK/GREEN:
blown out of a mouth, the smoke from the mouth forms the words
“A KAGELYNN ISOM FILM”
FADE TO BLACK:
EXT. 21 DOPE SREETM - DAY
A 1975 care goes by and the smoke from the engine forms the words
“SCREENPLAY BY KAGELYNN ISOM AND GARY WARREN”
High schoolers run threw the smoked words
CUTOUT:
INT. HOUSE - DAY
Close up on weed being lit by a group, then backs out to mid, 7 people in the movie blow the smoke and it forms the words
“dedicated to diyan west & hunter s. Thompson”
Everything goes very smoky fog
The words leek out in black ink,
21 dope street,
there are hand prints all over
Threw the song people are lighting it up and blowing out there own names.
　
By Gary Warren and Jack Greens
verse no# 1 : in a town where I got stoned was my bro who sold good pot
he lived his life a gay, but it don't bother me either way
so we party all the time kissing women and drinkin’ wine
bridge: don’t bother me with work I'd rather eat dirt,
I live on 21st street with all tha nutts and quirks, st, st, st
And this town was called twenty one dope street
ooh we smoke a lotta dope do alotta coke. living tha life just ain’t no joke
ooh we smoke a lotta dope do alotta coke. Smokin’ all that dope, and living just no joke
verse no # 2 ; then one day they bashed tha gays in a crazy gay parade, so we took up tha cause ‘cause Johnny law has got no balls
it ain't cool to hurt your bro's so keep on truckin’ forget your hoe's
with psychedelic lights all ablaze I keep on trippin’ to purple hazechorus
no # 2 ; 21 dope street, 21 dope street don't bogart that joint cause it smells so sweet ,,,,,,,,,,, 21 dope street
repeat chorus no # 2:
ooh we smoke a lotta dope, and do alotta coke.
ooh we smoke a lotta dope, and do alotta cokea.
we smoke a lotta dope, and do alotta coke. living tha life just ainn’t no joke
verse no # 3; now my life is such a waste but ooh so happy and filled with grace...I know my parents stay on my case but it's so wrong to call me a basket case
it's just that we have different dreams.....not the illusions of worldly things,
so I drift from week to week on 21 dope streets with freaks n geeks
ooh we smoke a lotta dope do alotta coke. living tha life just ainn’t no joke
ooh we smoke a lotta dope do alotta coke. living tha life just ainn’t no joke
bridge no # 2 ; 21 dope street ,21 dope street
etch.....amp out the end .
‘radio mix’s up the song’
Smokers never thought we’d find the place where dugs belong
Don’t have to be high alone weed will never letcha die
Don’t need permission to decide what shit to buy
I said SMOKE,
down on dope street,
I said SMOKE
Down on dope street
your dealers be there when your money’s on the wall,
you’ll finely need some when you find out your all gone,
(And all the heartless visions not whatcha need)a super sized bag what’s you need
you better be ready to,
be ready to
SMOKE,
TWENTEY ONE DOPE STREET
FADE TO BLACK:
CUTS IN WHITE:
jack is wearing a biker jacket with his hair stick up and ripped light gains, he has some makeup on like former rock star, Alice cooper, and with rugged boots on.
INT. BOOTS - WALK - DAY
CLOSE UP:
his boots and everyone elses shoes, Jack is walking across the road, Jack opens the door to the store to a Minnie mart.
CUTS IN:
Jack greens eyes. with sleepy eye’s nothing but his eyes are shown
DOLLY OUT:
she is wearing a tie dyed short dress with daisy’s in her hair, she wears also a peace symbol on a gold chain
Away from jacks eyes to a long shot of daisey, in the store
CLOSE UP:
Jacks eye’s go wide
EXT. MINIE MARKIT - DAY
Jacks back and daisey ‘s side are shown in the store.
the song ‘rock you like a harracain’ is playing from a radio that jack has with him
CLOSE UP:
camera show a very close up on the yellow and silver radio, then backs up to a mid shot
BACKS UP:
jack walks in and the camera goes behind the counter showing daiseys face and jack just standing there
counter guy is wearing a white shirt, he looks stoned, he also has a green aperine on
DAISEY
Hi, do you have any incense?
COUNTER GUY
…Yes we do.
DAISEY
Can I get some please!
COUNTER GUY
Yes its right by the sunglasses.
DAISEY
Okay great you’re a sweetie.
(daisey bumps Jack)
Oh I’m sorry Hun.
(the camera follows dasiey)
JACK
Its all good… hey what’s your name?
DAISEY
Its daisey, what’s yours?
JACK
My name’s jack, jack Greens… you sure
are a babe
(looking horning)
DAISEY
Please, don’t call me that it sounds like a
hooker or something.
JACK
oh sorry….I was just admiring your dress,
you look real good with it on.
DAISEY
that’s sweet of you, jack, did you say?
JACK
Yeah that’s me.
(he makes a funny face, laughs)
DAISEY
that’s korny….Jack that’s so groovy, are you
always this friendly?
(Laughs, she cant help it.)
JACK
Yeah just a groovy kind of guy.
(the song ‘groovy kinda guy ‘plays in the back)
(they are walking to the back of the store, the camera is in the back of them)
JACK
Hey I got some good weed if you want any?
DAISEY
Well maybe a little, I don’t smoke pot that much,
my parents are kinda geeks if you know what I mean
(they stop at the end of the store and they turn to the side)
JACK
Super cool let me get a 12 pack of coke and some smokes
(while he grabs the things he needs)
Its like my breakfast
(smiles)
(they start to walk back, the cam follows the front, backwards)
DAISEY
Here let me buy some sandwiches for us
(they stop walking)
JACK
Wow you would do that for a dead shit like me?
(dasiey walks to pay, the cam stays on jack)
DAISEY
Yeah why not Hun
JACK
Um… I don’t know. Ha!
(jack walk out of screen)
CUTS-IN:
EXT. HOUSE-DAY
(shows them walking into the door, cam follows there foot steps)
INT. HOUSE-DAY
(the camera from the feet moves up the back legs Intel the back of the head is only shown)
(they walk past the living room and start to head up the stairs)
JACK
Lady’s first.
(she starts to walk up, POV of jacks. jack trips three times every time he is trying to look up her dress)
(every time he trips he sees her underwear)
CUTS:
INT. ROOMS - DAY
The room has twisted sisster,dio, alice cooper, the doors and all the rock bands of the 80’s, posters on the wall and a sckall on the wall, and one qween bed with a window by the bed, his sheets and blankit is rambowie but duol,with rips. The wall are filled with things just put there for no resoin a yellow tent of the wall color is the wall by the window, black is the one by the door. He has shaggy carpit yet other piecer’s are more of a calm light part. He has a radio right by his bed, with tons of records and a few CD’s.
JACK
Well this is my sleazy greasy room, how do you like it?
(show scan of his room, then close in to daisy’s face)
DAISEY
Its raid, its so…so--
(camrea dollys fast out of a close up of her face and moves to a mid shot of jack)
JACK
--so what?
DAISEY
Dope!?
JACK
Good
(long shot of the room away from the door)
DAISEY
Its really interesting, I like the sunflower posters on your door
(dolly to a tight close up of the poster)
JACK
Its just something to cover up the hole I
punched through when I got mad at my dad this one time
(jack is mad but trys not to show it, he lifts the poster to see the hole and the blood on it)
(jack walks away, its back to a long shot of the room)
DAISEY
(giggles)
Ouch
JACK
(jack is sitting on the bed and pats his hand down to sign for her to sit too)
Here sit!
DAISEY
Okay
(cam, show her back then moves with her tighly to the bed where she turns towards the cam, a mid shot)
(the cam tighly fallows jacks hand down to the floor, he grabs his bong, the bong is very trippy and beautiful, and there are 8 others all dif. The cam pulls back out the a close mid shot of just there bodys, extreme close up at the weed being lightend, you can hear it burn, he lights a hit, and chocks on it)
JACK
Here have a hit of this stuff
(viewing of all the smoke)
(while she takes the hit)
JACK
It’s the coolest hookah bong ever.. I got it on 28th street
DAISEY
… … … … … … Really?
JACK
Yeah do you know that psychedelic shop there?
DAISEY
Um… umm.. that’s.. some strong pot
JACK
Yeah I know, you soon should be seeing things,
But do ya?
DAISEY
…What?
JACK
Yeah
(he try’s to kiss her)
DAISEY
What are you doing? I like girls!
JACK
Ooh, no way?
DAISEY
Yeah, s’sorry
JACK
Its all good, you…--Wanna dance?
DAISEY
But how?
(jack gets up and turns some songs on from the 80’s)
DAISEY
Oh my gosh I love this song
(have effects give off that 3D tripping look and sound when she starts to say she loves this song)
(they dance to ‘I am the walrus‘)
(the screen turns dif front color’s, and a mix of weird songs are played like its been hr’s)
(they fall on the bed and calm down. They look at each other’s eye’s, they laugh for 10 sec)
FADES-OUT SLOWLY
CUTS-IN FAST TO WHITE
(cam, very close up on its side, then turns the right way to show that that where laying, and backs up to a mid, they are wearing nothing but underwear and bras)
DAISEY
(screams)
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.
(she sees jack right next to her like they did something)
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.
(cam, mid shot at the end of the bed by the window)
(jack gets up real fast after she screems for the 2 time)
JACK
(screams)
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh…What?
(cam, moves to long shot, she gets up really fast to get stuff on)
DAISEY
I was suposto be home yesterday.
JACK
(jack is just sitting up)
For real?
DAISEY
Yes.
(she is getting her cloths)
(jack get’s up out the bed then trips on her bag, cam falls with jack, the backs up to see her too)
DAISEY
Where the cheese and wine is my bag??
(while he is still on the ground)
(cam, extreme close up on jack’s face)
JACK
Here it is!
(cam, slow at first then real fast backs out to a long shot)
DAISEY
Oh thanks.
(jack is chilling out on the floor in a criss cross)
JACK
Um just ‘cause I am wondering, why must you go now?
(dasieys faceing the wall and the cam see’s jack behind)
(as she is putting on her boots)
DAISEY
Well my dad is umm, you know
JACK
You mean a square?
(makes a square with his fingers)
(both laugh)
(jack gets up on the bed)
JACK
What time is it?
DAISEY
…um four
JACK
Oh chicken breasts, I have to be ready less then twenty minutes
(jack sits up, and she’s about to walk out the door)
(cam follows her to the door)
DAISEY
Um.. Jack.. Here’s my number!
(she hands jack a paper)
(cam follows the paper, to jacks face)
(camera shows the back of the paper then moves out the window but at the same time jack moved close to the window to look out and there’s
The junkyer waiting for jack)
FADE-OUT
CUT-IN
(ex long shot from the window of jacks room, the cam moves out the closed window then down the ally to a mid shot)
INT. ALLY-DAY
(The sun is shining)
(Jack is in pj’s but in his biker jacket on, his hair is dulled out and he looks and acts flushed)
(Junkyer is in a ratted up lab jacket and a Hawaii shirt and he has no pants on and with socks, hairy legs, bald, a sports hat with a very weird flower on it)
(cam, close up on the junkeyer’s hands shaking,)
(cam, long shot jack walking to the junkyer)
JUNKYER
Hey man do you got my kello?
JACK
What? No I got you the 50, remember?
JUNKYER
Oh oh yeah man, sorry.
(jack hands junkyer a brown paper bag)
JACK
Here ya go my man, the times 420, man, have fun.
(mid shot of junkyer then he walks away to long shot)
(Jack is standing there in a weird way,
like he is thinking)
JUNKYER
Now I can finely to threw time.
(creepy laughs, and walks away while he looks in the bag, and it glows)
(Cam backs off jack to a long shot)
CUTS-OUT
INT. JACKS RAIL ROAD WALK-DUSK
FADES-IN
(Long shot of jack walking down a rail road with the sun going down)
(the sun it going down, camera shows him just walking somewhere on a rail road track)
(Cam shows his feet then brings it up to his side face)
(Cam follows him in turns, to a phone)
(he walks up to a pay phone and puts in two coins, it rings two times)
JACK
Hello?
DAISEY
Hey… who is this?
(jack looks out to make sure no one is watching)
JACK
Its jack greens
DAISEY
Oh hey, whats going on honey?
JACK
Well I was wondering if you want to hang out tonight?
DAISEY
Yeah sure, where do you want to meet?
JACK
By the high school
DAISEY
Okay groovy, I be there at 12 am
JACK
Okay bye--- oh and… do you want to go to a concert with me?
DAISEY
Yes! When?
JACK
I in I think 2 or I don’t know, okay Ill see you in three hrs
DAISEY
(laughs)
Okay bye.
FADES -OUT
INT. DINNING ROOM - NIGHT
FADES - IN
(v-ann and ruze is sitting at the dinning room table with dinner set at the table, v-ann is wearing baby blue srips with white, sweater. Ruze is wearing her hair poofed up and red lips. No one tuched the food)
(jack runs in and sits down and pigs out, mid long shot of the table, facing v-ann)
V-ANN
Where have you been jack? We have been waiting for 30 minutes.
(With his mouth full)
JACK
Um just out on the town… where have you been mom, ive been looking for you
V-ANN
don’t be a smart jack, go a head and eat ruze
RUZE
Finley.
(cam face’s jack and ruze)
JACK
Whats the big deal, man? Why you acting weird?
RUZE
Shes not acting weird… hey jack when can I smoke pot?
JACK
In a.. in 2hrs when im gone
RUZE
But how can I smoke it then?
JACK
You cant…
RUZE
Wait, what?…. Jack?-Im--
JACK
--hey mom I gadda go.. Bye.
(jack runs to his room, cam face’s v- ann for 3 secs)
(cam face’s jack and ruze‘s seats, jack runs by and out the door, he slams the door)
CUT-OUT
EXT. SCHOOL-NIGHT
FADES-IN
In a parking lot
The cop 2 is in a blue suit so is cop 1 but he has a riped shirt, the girl is in nothing but a small dress riped, white, long
(a loud sound like a guitar is blasted then gets to a back sound song, the song TNT by AC/DC have the end where he gets grabed, the song blast)
Close up on jacks feet then move up to see the cops come out jacks hand
(shows jack walking around in a parking lot and hears a scream)
JACK
Cam, follows jack
(runs and hides behind a car)
Cam, jacks view
(Shows a bruised and bloody girl being held by a police officer)
COP 1
(slaps girl)
Hey I said to keep quiet didn’t I?
(Another cop comes from behind a car)
COP 2
I got the rope and the tape lets hurry and put her in the trunk
COP 1
Okay
(both cops and lady starts walking towards the trunk of the car that jack is hiding behind)
JACK
(whispers something)
(he hears the trunk slam shut)
(Cop 2 sees Jack)
COP 2
HEY!!!
(jack gets up and starts to run)
Pj pants and underwear get caught on bumper and rip off)
Cam, follows jack tell his paints are off, then stop at the stuck on the bumper, the cop runs by,
Cam, show jacks back
JACK
(screams)
Help me
(jack runs threw the field,
Cam, shows the girl getting out then pans to jack in the feild
the girl jet’s out of the trunk and try‘s to run)
Cam, close up on cop1, he spits
COP 1
(yells)
Get him now
(as he hold’s the girl)
GIRL
Close up
(slaps cop 1 and runs)
COP 1
Ah cheese its
Covers his cheek with his hand
Close up
(runs after her)
EXT. FIELD-DAY
(show scan of the field)
INT. FIELD-DAY
Cam, follow jacks back then turns to his right side, then turn to his chest when hes behind the tree
Jack is running and then the girl runs behind a tree
COP 2
close up
(runs and stops to take a breath, at that time jack runs behind a tree, the same as the girl)
JACK
Oh my gosh…
GIRL
Over the shoulder of jack
(Screams a little)
JACK
Over the shoulder
What’s happening why are they doing this? who are they?
GIRL
Over the shoulder
There cops, and I saw them doing something that can get them arrested
JACK
Over the shoulder
What was it?
GIRL
They smoked dope
JACK
Wha---
Close up then turns to view of jack
COP 2
(to girl)
I fond you
(laughs)
GIRL
(screams)
JACK
(backs up into cop 1)
COP 1
(grabs jack and shakes him)
What are you doing, what did you ask her?
JACK
(wimpy)
Nothing, nothing, please don’t kill me my mom knows I’m here, just called her a sec ago
COP 1
Well you should feel lucky, but I am going to see you everyday for now on, got it buddy boy?
JACK
Okay okay just don’t kill me
COP 1
(laughs, then leaves)
FADES-OUT SLOWLY
FADE IN:
Nick; in a jock football player lise: cheerleader
cheapest upstairs apartment ,but it's conveniently located next to a quick stop
They go there at sunset , no one gets up early, or for that matter sleep much. This is sort of the catch all and export of their needs.
It's got a hole in the wall from some lame misunderstanding never fixed because the bong fits inside really well.
NICK
Hey Lisa I bet I can get more stoned before you can.
LISA
(laughs)
I bet you can’t
NICK
I’ll match you?
LISA
You’re on man
CUT-IN
To them almost done
EXTRAS
SMOKE, SMOKE, SMOKE yeah ah wow, oh my…
LISA
I’m Alice in wonder land .
She laughs.
NICK
I can fly.
LISA
It’s a full moon, we should do something.
NICK
Like what?
LISA
We should make a movie!
NICK
(Thinks sex tape---see image of porn)
What kind?
He laughs.
LISA
A scary movie!
NICK
Oh?!
He laughs.
They go out They go to this recreational trail that follows the old railroad tracks by the lake because there's a graveyard in view.
as they are making their scary noises and stuff the graveyard guard comes out to investigate, which scares the shit out of them. They would forget about those really low gravestones, and get a bit banged up)
and make a shitty movie.
show shitty film clips here
EXT. ALLEY-DAY
LISA
What the cheese balls happened last night?
NICK
I don’t know, but we are going to be late for school.
LISA
Ah fudge packer!
EXT.SCHOOL-DAY
The bell rings.
INT.SCHOOL-DAY
Camera scan shows the class room. The teachers are talking.
its half way in the school day---
show a clock on the wall show with it’s hands on 1.p.m.
Jack shows up.
He struts a slow and cool walk.
INT.CLASSROOM-DAY
MR.STENCH
Oh, you finely show up Mr. Greens?
JACK
Yeah well, don’t call me that ALRIGHT? My name IS JACK.
MR.STENCH
Well, from my papers your last name is Greens.
JACK
(yells)
Its jack, mr greens is my fathers name
and for your information, I only showed up
because the narks showed up at my house!
MR.STENCH
(makes a mean face, mad)
Okay Jack take a seat.
JACK
Why should I? Mr. stench
MR. STENCH
Let’s move on to our next lesson about covers.
JACK
I’m outta here who’s coming with me?
Ten guys and two girls follow. Elena stands up.
ELENA
Hello MR.STENCH? May I go to the bathroom?
MR.STENCH
Yeah you may.
INT.HALLWAY-DAY
ELENA
Hey I want to come with you Jack.
JACK
(smiles)
You do?
ELENA
Yes I think you’re real cool.
JACK
Well I’ll be damned. What’s your name kid?
ELENA
(smiles)
Well my name is Elena, and I am a straight “A” student.
JACK
Well just follow m…
MR.STENCH
What do you think your doing Jack?
JACK
(Sarcastic)
Just being kind, Sir.
ELENA
He…, what? Was just helping me to the, bathrooms.
MR.STENCH
You have been going here for over a months,
by now you should know were the bathrooms
are, keep your cover.
ELENA
Well I…?
JACK
She just asked me something. Is that such a crime?
MR.STENCH
No cover, well Elena go back to class now.
ELENA
We’ll talk later.
JACK
Then here’s my number, I dig you.
(He writes it on her hand)
INT. CLASSROOM-DAY
Elena sighs, and goes back to class.
INT. HALLWAY-DAY
Jack walks down the hallway with a lit cigarette.
RANDOM TEACHER
(Passing by)
Hey there’s no smoking in the school.
JACK
Cool it babe, I’m leaving.
RANDOM TEACHER
Put it out now!
JACK
(He laughs and looks at his friends)
okay!
(He puts the lit up cigarette in his mouth and chews it and swallows.)
JACK
(CONT.)
Anything else?
He laughs and walks out the door.
RANDOM TEACHER
Oh …, no! Are you okay?
JACK
Don’t worry… its mixed.
ENT.CAR-DAY
Jack is about to get in the car.
Six or seven other students are nearby.
Jack makes a loud announcement.
JACK
(SHOUTS)
Who wants some pot? Ah guys?
(Everyone goes crazy and runs toward him).
JACK
(SMILES)
Then let’s go!
INT.CAR-STREET-DAY
Some rock song playing in the back ground
Jack is singing to it. The car is a “Hippy Car”.
Two boys are sitting in the back seat.
He sees Elena on the sidewalk. He pulls over.
She gets in.
EXT.HOUSE-DAY
They get to jacks house.
JACK
Okay everybody out.
Jack notices Elena following behind him.
Jack smiles.
JACK
everyone inside.
ELENA
Thank you kind Sir.
He holds the door open for her.
INT. HOUSE-DAY
JACK
Well, well, well, nice to see you here, but how’d you get out?
ELENA
(SINISTER SMILE)
Well, I did something real bad just for you.
JACK
(Smiles)
What ya do that is THAT bad babe?
ELENA
(Whispers)
I forged a note!
JACK
(laughs)
You really are a GOOD girl!
ELENA
(SWEET)
No I’m bad to the bone.
JACK
(laughs)
Alright! So have you ever gotten “HIGH” before?
ELENA
No, but I hear real good things. What’s it like?
JACK
It’s real fun. Why don’t you come on in and I’ll show you.
ELENA
Okay.
INT.HOUSE-LIVING ROOM-DAY
They are all in the house. Elena sits down
on the sofa.
ELENA
How do I smoke it Jack?
JACK
You open your mouth. I take a hit. And I
push the smoke in your mouth, like this….
Jack kisses Elena.
Her lips quiver as he touches them. She is
nervous and tries to follow his lead…
The smoke goes down into her throat, and
she coughs. They are making out when
cops show up!)
EXT.HOUSE-DAY
Jack opens his eyes to see police siren
lights flashing!
He pulls back away from her.
JACK
(YELLS)
holly ORANGES! THE COPS ARE BACK!
(Softer tone)
Okay everyone out but you Elena, you’re with me now.
Close-up…
Show Jack’s sexy smile
ELENA
(NERVOUS)
But Jack I have to go. Besides, I’m dating someone at this time.
JACK
WHO?!
ELENA
(PAUSED)
Well …, the leader of “ The Pack“.
Show a photo of nick
JACK
You mean the “goodie two shoes”
that got me put in jail for helping someone cross the street?
ELENA
(SHOCKED)
He did what?!
JACK
You have to go, your right. They’ll put you in jail if your stoned,
well and baby…I’m not stoned
ELENA
I am?
JACK
Yep.
He gently pulls her arm. He leads her out the
back door of the house. He closes the
screen door. She leaves just in time. The two
cops come in the front door of house.
He quickly walks and sprays air-freshener.
Jack greets them at the front door.., just in
time.
COP 1
We saw your car in the drive way. What’s going on here?
COP 2
Why aren’t you at school?
JACK
Well… I just forgot my book.
JACK(V/O)
(CONT)
Why the hell did I say book?
JACK
(TO THE COPS)
I’m going now Sir.
He starts to walk out the door.
COP 1
Well get your book!?
JACK
Yeah, yeah my…book.
COP 1
Well get it!
JACK
(Holds up his pointer finger)
HOLD ON A SEC…, I have to find it first.
COP 2
(laughs)
Do you even have a book?
Jack looks everywhere to find ANY book!
He looks under sofa cushions!
And under the table.
JACK
HA…I FOUND ONE! I mean it.
COP 1
…Let me see that book boy?
JACK
Sure…
He hands cop1 the book.
COP 1
Boy you know what its about?
JACK
Yeah…
COP 1
(Hold back laugh)
Kid this is about guy’s genitals, you know that right?
JACK
(Blank face)
Umm…, yeah…, I… like… that… type of story
He showed a fake, nervous smile.
COP 2
Alright carry on..
COP 1
(The cop1 grabs the book, opened the
book and pointed to a line on the page
I want you to read this here line in the
book before we go kid!.
JACK
(Clears his throat)
Okay… um… He started to sweat, as every time… he went,
He went down on the
“softly”
‘other man‘
… the junk slammed …on a wall! Okay that’s enough.
You get the point…
COP 2
Finish it kid.
JACK
(SMIRKS)
But I have go to school.
COP 1
(YELLS)
NOW boy!
JACK
And the feelful of ‘’ stuff going in ’’’’ grass ‘heeks.
He slams the book shut!
JACK (CONT.)
Okay you had your fun, now can I go to school?
COP 2
Alright, go on now.
JACK
(DISGUSTED)
THANK YOU.
He places the book on the coffee table.
Jack then walks out.
EXT.HOUSE-DAY
COP 1
(YELLS)
Kid you forgot your book!
The cop smiles and almost laughs.
Jack stops halfway down the sidewalk.
JACK
(ANGRY)
You MOTHER TRUCKER!
He goes back in the house and gets it.
Then he runs to his car AND SPEEDS
AWAY!
Spinning his tires and leaving behind tire
tracks on the road!
INT.CAR-DAY
Jack curses the cops! He slams his fist
on the steering wheel.
He has no intention of going back to
school.
He rides around for a while…, to cool off.
He sees Elena walking on the sidewalk.
He honks his horn!
She looks startled as she sees him and then
runs over to his car.
She bends down at the level of the window.
ELENA
What happened after I left?
He popped the door open for her.
JACK
Get in.
They sit on the side of the road for a minute,
and then Jack pulls out slowly.
JACK
They are such…SUCH…grape juices, They really make me MAD!
Do you want to finish what we started?
He smiled at her.
ELENA
Sure.., it sounds like fun.
He leaned over and she closed her legs
quickly!
Jack was still driving as he opened his
glove box.
He pulled out a nickel bag of pot!
He held it up!
JACK
Do you want to smoke a few blunts?
EXT. CAR-DAY
Jack drove to an open field.
JACK
The wooded area was closed off since it was a
Habitat for wildlife reserves.
INT. CAR-DAY
He carefully rolled two blunts.
JACK
Since you’re new to this, I’ll explain.
She smirked at him.
JACK
These are called Blunts. Maybe a long time ago they were called Joints?
You can’t smoke them with seeds in them or they will pop!
(He handed one over to her so she
could inspect it.
She handed it back to him)
ELENA
Will it do anything bad to me?
He shook his head.
JACK
NO! It will make you feel good and it will calm you down. It’s a proven medical fact!
ELENA
They use this stuff for medical reasons?
JACK
Of course they do! It helps people with their eyesight and for
cancer patients. I know If I was dying of cancer.., I’d get high everyday!
ELENA
But, this is illegal!? We can get into trouble?
JACK
Come on now! The cops smoke this stuff too! And they get all their pot from busting us…
He handed it to her.
She looked at it.
ELENA
Well…, if the cops do it? Than I think we should at least try it!?
She pinched the end of it and then inhaled.
She got mostly air, and then started to cough!
Jack laughed.
After they get out of the car.
EXT.CAR-DAY
Deer and squirrels were running by.
They walked a bit. His hand brushed hers.
She then looked at him and took his hand…
ELENA
Jack?
He looked into her eyes.
JACK
Yes?
ELENA
I‘m a cop!
Jack stopped walking. He had a shocked
look on his face.
ELENA
Ha! Ha! Just kidding! You should see your face right now I so got you big time…
JACK
Well that’s pretty funny
(SMILES AND WALKS OF IN TO THE DISTINTS)
FADE OUT
INT.CLASSROOM-DAY
(jack is at the back of class)
(Jack is talking to he’s friends, Johnny, Andrew and Steven)
JACK
Yo teach, we heard that you got put in jail, that true?
TEACHER
Where did you hear that?
(Jack and his friends laugh)
ANDREW
(Chews his gum)
How cha get in?
JOHNNY
Yeah, how?.
TEACHER
Um…
STEVEN
Because we all heard that you was a…
(laughs)
a…
ANDREW
Drug dealer
TEACHER
Its true
(screams and falls to the floor)
JACK
ah getta outa here
TEACHER
(Runs out)
(Everyone laughs but Jack, he sits and chews his gum
with a smirks on he’s face, he cares about her)
EXT. HALL WAY PART-TWO
Elena walks up to Jack in the hallway,
jack is still walking with his friends,
JACK
Hey did you hear about the teacher that wigged out today?
ELENA
What no but I…
JACK
You should of seen it
(smiles and walks off as she is about to talk)
ELENA
wait Jack--
FADES OUT
INT.HALLWAY-DAY
UNDERCOVER
Oh I can’t do this anymore, I can’t take it this is driving me CRAZY, I’M DONE WITH THE UNDERCOVER WORK
(screams, then falls to the floor)
JACK
Wait what’s goin’’’ on? WE HAVE COPS IN THE SCHOOL?
JOHNNY
Okay boys you keep an eye out over there and me and Jack
with on this side of the school make sure no one leaves. Got it?
ANDREW
Got it!
STEVEN
Clear as water
JACK
You take care of the door I am going out. I’m already high as can be!
(laughs)
INT. HALLWAY-DAY
JACK
Hey Andrew, johnny and steven! we have cops in the school and I herd that there is ONE more here
JOHNNY
Were ya hear that jack?
JOHNNY
I herd that too, but it was my dad saying, you know
that there are because he’s a cop too, my dad
JACK
Yeah, I herd from the cops at my house that watch me, you know?
STEVEN
There’s goanna a party at my house to night you ALL have to come
JACK
(he laughs)
that’s what she said
(Everyone laughs)
JACK
I’ll be there, About the nark, we have to find the other
ANDREW
Will there be pot there?
STEVEN
FUGH CHEASECAKE, YEAH
(all them yell in happiness)
JACK
(un answered pose, he watch’s them
like they know nothing)
EXT. PARKINGLOT-DAY
(they arrive in a corvette)
( jack gets out with friends)
EXT. J-HOUSE-NIGHT
JACK
Where’s the pot?
STEVEN
Yeah, you showed up
JOHNNY
FREAK yeah, why would we miss this
JACK
Come on now its FREE WEED
STEVEN
Ha, you got a point.
INT. J-HOUSE-NIGHT
JOHNNY
Wow look at all these fine hoochie mommas
(three girls walk up to all three of jacks friends)
JACK
Well johnny you cant see two with just one eye
Where’s my lovely ladie for the night?
ELENA
Jack!!!
(she runs up and kisses him)
(everyone is passing the weed around
and getting very high)
FADES OUT
EXT. HOUSE-DAY
COP 1
HEY I FOUND ALL YOUR POT! Little Jackie
JACK
WHAT NOOOOOOoooooo
COP 1
(smiles)
So you want to not go to be killed do ya?
JACK
What are you intending?
COP 1
Well I can kill you for having a gun to my head
JACK
I don’t have a gun, how can that happen?
COP 1
(puts a gun in his hands then puts it in a bag)
now you do
JACK
What do you want?
COP 1
Get $5,000 dollars and I will not have to pull my gun on you
JACK
Not if I kill you first
COP 1
What was that?
JACK
nothing
COP 1
You have tell the 31st
JACK
that’s just a week!
COP 1
(laughs)
I know
(cop 1 walks out)
(jack sits down on his couch)
FADES-OUT
FADES-IN
jack and steven, Johnny and Andrew is
playing a rock song, backstage girl by
the kids, play 1 3rd of the song
FADES-OUT
EXT. SCHOOL-DAY
JOHNNY
So you guys hear?
JACK
What are you talking about?
JOHNNY
You know how we need money and all?
JACK
Yeah?
JOHNNY
Well the school talent show has a prize cash for the winners!
JACK
So we can win it and get the money?
Wait but how much do we get?
JOHNNY
$10,000 dollars.
JACK
(thinks to him self)
FADES-OUT
FADES-IN
EXT. DOCTOR-DAY
STEVEN
Hey doc doctor
ANDREW
Yeah what’s up doc
DOCTOR
Doooo…Do you have… another prob…blem?
STEVEN
(laughs)
yeah we have ah… ah
ANDREW
(laughs)
uh …cance-a!
DOCTOR
Can cance-a?
ANDREW
Yeah Cancea!
DOCTOR
And what do you need from me?
(seven and Andrew look at each other and smile)
ANDREW & STEVEN
Weed!
DOCTOR
What? I can’t hear you
(Andrew & Steven both look at each other for the 2 time & make a weird face)
ANDREW & STEVEN
( they both make a weird sound almost like a laugh)
WEED!
DOCTOR
Well ok…ay then
ANDREW
(whispers)
yeah…
(the Doctor goes in a lab room and comes back with a BIG bag)
DOCTOR
Well here ya go
STEVEN
Tank ya, man I lave ya
ANDREW
I’m glade we came… HA
STEVEN
HA
FADE OUT
INT. HALLWAY-DAY
ELENA
Hey jack how are you doing?
JACK
What?
ELENA
HOW…ARE…YOU?
JACK
Oh! Good but just one thing!
ELENA
What would that be Jack?
JACK
COPS!
ELENA
(in a worried sound and look)
W…what would …c…cops have to do with anything?
JACK
everything!!!
ELENA
What?
JACK
They took everything from me!
ELENA
What!
JACK
And now I hear that your one! Is that true?
ELENA
Ha…HA, no!
JACK
Okay fine but we better get to class
ELENA
Okay jack
EXT.21STREET-DAY
(an out look of the place)
INT.21STREET-DAY
ELENA
Fuller, why did we have to move?
FULLER
Because
(kindly)
ELENA
But Fuller we had so much going in in the old place
FULLER
I don’t want to hear it
(walks in his new office)
ELENA
(stands out the door side)
Pinhall I need your help in the case!
PINHALL
no way!
HANSON
You gatda do something sooner or later!
PINHALL
What would make you think I would be good in this case?
ELENA
You and Hanson have that McQwoud thing and I think if you go to the school and become that baddest kids thing, we can finally find out about drugs and find the guy who killed that teacher and 7 others last month!
PINHALL
Shouldn’t we talk to Fuller about this first?
ELENA
Then lets go tell him!
PINHALL
Fine
INT. FULLERS-NEW-OFFEICE
PINHALL
Fuller, we need to talk to you about that case Elena is on
HANSON
Yeah, we want to… tell him Dung!
PINHALL
(with a scared face)
To join in
FULLER
I don’t know if that would be such a good idea!
PINHALL&HANSON
(look at the others face then make a baby face)
Awww-please-please-please-please--
FULLER
Fine but what will you two do?
PINHALL
Well sure, I was hoping that we could act as the bad kids then get the other kid, Jack,
to befriend us then we can find out if he killed her and 7 others!
FULLER
Hanson?
HANSON
(not paying attention)
Huh what?
FULLER
Are you sure your up for this?
HANSON
Ready as I’ll ever be caption
FULLER
Fine, you and Hanson start tomorrow
HANSON&PINHALL
(look at one other)
YES!
EXT. SCHOOL-DAY-5
PINHALL
Tom, I can’t believe we got in!
HANSON
I know!
PINHALL
Yeah
HANSON
its time to head in
INT. SCHOOL DAY 5
HASON&PINHALL
(walk down the hall to Elena)
ELENA
Jack, this is my brothers.
JACK
(talking to his friends)
What?
ELENA
Theses are my brothers! Tom Hanson and dung pinhall
JACK
Then why aren’t your names the same?
HANSON
that’s because are dads aren’t the same
PINHALL
And we grew up some were else
HANSON
Hey you sale weed?
JACK
Elena leave us, him and I need to talk
ELENA
Uh okay
(Elena and Pinhall leaves slowly)
JACK
You think I’m some kind of druggy?
HASON
Uh
JACK
Well I’m not, and even if I did I wouldn’t sale to you
HANSON
Why?
JACK
Because… you don’t look like some one that would smoke anyways,
what are you getting it for your gramma?
HANSON
As a matter of fact!
JACK
what!
HANSON
Dude, I’m just kidding, no, its for me, man…
…What do you think I’m a geek?
JACK
Duuuuh…
HANSON
Fine, I’ll prove it, I’ll punch that KID right there
JACK
You wont do it
HANSON
The hell I won’t
(Hanson walks right up to the first person he sees and hits them)
(they fall to the floor)
HANSON
How’s that?
JACK
Well…wow…you did…alright you wanna hang out?
HANSON
Naw man I’m busy
JACK
What??
HASON
(walks away)
JACK
…I like him
(he smiles)
FADES-OUT
FADES-IN
Camera shows a scan of a bar
Shows Hanson then Elena and then Pinhall sitting talking
HANSON
Man this guy is weird, I thought he didn’t like me?
ELENA
Well he talked about you like you were a brother,
now if we can get him to like you Pinhall
(smiles)
PINHALL
Ha ha ha very funny.
(looks at Hanson)
Did you see the chicks there?
HANSON
(smiles)
ELENA
You guys that’s not funny, this is really not a good thing
if your going to find out if he was the one who
killed the teacher then he has to like use all
HANSON
(makes a funny face)
PINHALL
(laughs)
(sung)Sinners are much more fun
(laughs)
HANSON
(laughs)
(sung)I might as be the one
PINHALL HANSON
(Look at each other)
(sung) only the good die young
ELENA
(smiles)
you guys come on
HANSON
Oh come on were just messing with you
PINHALL
What do you think I should do?
ELENA
Well…if we can get tom to talk about you while
he goes out to his house to (smoke pot) so to say-
PINHALL
Smoke pot!
ELANA
Well yeah but you don’t have to really do it you can-
HANSON
What have you been up to?
(laughs)
ELENA
Nothing, you can use fake pot
HANSON
Do we even have something that smells the same?
ELENA
Yeah
PINHALL
Well then, okay lets do it
HANSON
(clears his throat)
(smiles)
um… I have to do it…not you
(smiles)
PINHALL
Aww your just a little baby that you HAVE TO tell people
(kisses him on the forehead)
HANSON
Ah get outta here
ELENE
(Smiles)
FADES-OUT
FADES-IN
Starts out with a close up on a cheeseburger
JACK
Well I really don’t think you… have what it takes to smoke pot
HANSON
Are you kidding me?
JACK
No
HANSON
well fine then I can get my own, and Ill tell everyone that you’re a snitch
JACK
I was just kidding, you can have some
HANSON
That sounds better
(smiles)
JACK
Well I have to go, I have to go help my friend with his outfit
HANSON
What?
JACK
Yeah, he has a date
HANSON
Oh that makes sense
(fake smile)
JACK
I’m not gay!
HANSON
Sure
(fake smile)
JACK
I’m not
(try’s not to smile)
HANSON
I know I’m just kidding like you did
JACK
That was not funny
(After saying that laugh)
(then takes a bite)
FADE-OUT
EXT.21-DOPESTREET-DAY
FULLER
You need what?
ELENA
Fake weed
FULLER
We don‘t have any
ELENA
We don‘t?
FULLER
No
HASON
Oh that’s just great
ELENA
Well we could-
PINHALL
The doc!
HANSON
What?
PINHALL
Well there’s the doc people see, we can see if he has some “fake weed” in stock
FULLER
Okay go try that
ELENA
Lets go then
(all walk out the door)
FULLER
Hanson, I want to talk to you
HANSON
Yes!
FULLER
If you can’t get any, if you need to, go ahead and smoke the real pot,
we have to get this guy, he’s killed over 8 people
HASON
I know chief
(smiles kindly)
FADES-OUT
FADES-IN
EXT. DOCTOR-DAY
DOCTOR
Next
PINHALL
Com’on
(they walk in his office)
DOCTOR
Now what can I do for you?
HANSON
We need pot
DOCTOR
Um.. Sorry I can’t help you with that, you have to leav-
ELENA
Now wait a minute, we’re cops
( they show there badges)
DOCTOR
I still can’t get you mar-
PINHALL
We need fake pot
DOCTOR
Oh, I don’t have any, I’m sorry I can’t help you
ELENA
Well okay thank you anyways
(they all walk out)
EXT-PARKING-LOT
ELENA
Well what are we going to do now?
HANSON
Well Fuller told me before we left that if we need to we can smoke Jack’s pot
ELENA
He did?
HANSON
Yep
PINHALL
Wow, you almost have a license to kill
HANSON
I thought that too
ELENA
He told me that too, but I found some stuff
PINHALL
what about me
HANSON
He didn’t say anything about you
PINHALL
What? Why?
HANSON
Dung, com’on
PINHALL
What’s that so post to mean?
HANSON
means you can’t
PINHALL
I’ll talk to him
HANSON
you do that kid
PINHALL
don’t call me kid
FADES-OUT
FADES-IN
EXT-SCHOOL-DAY
(show scan of the class room, show jack reading a paper)
JACK
Every time I close my eyes I see the way you smile, the way you are, makes me joyful, everything about you keeps me going, you keep me up when I’m down
(laughs)
(Everyone laughs)
KID 1
Yeah she helps YOUR DICK UP
(Laughs)
JACK
Okay I’m done
(laughs)
MR. STENCH
(ANGREY)
who's next?
PINHALL
umm... I lost mine
HANSON
wing it!
PINHALL
okay,
(he slowly gets out of his seat and stands in front of the class)
Life gets hard,
(about to start laughing)
but when the going gets tough you get going,
(he does hand movements, the same as jacking off)
(every one but the teacher laughs)
MR.STENCH
(ANGREY)
go sit down NOW! Hanson your up
HANSON
(clears voice)
the naked eyes, when I see what I see I feel sad when I feel I feel pain, every one around me is high, but so am I, they smile I pass the weed. laughing at there own life’s not knowing...that’s all I have stench!
MR.STENCH
(happy)
wow, that was.. very good, but too short..
JACK
so is your dick!
(Everyone laughs)
MR.STENCH
(MAD)
office, NOW
(jack walks out with no sound, with a smile of pure laughter on his face)
INT.HALLWAY-DAY
FADES-IN
(jack walks in a slow gangster look, but then starts to walk a little faster, then starts to run, he runs out side)
FADES-OUT
EXT-OUTSIDE-SCHOOL-DAY
FADES-IN
(jack is smoking weed, then a teacher comes out)
RANDOM TEACHER
what are you doing?
JACK
what do you want?
RANDOM TEACHER
what do I want?
JACK
yeah?
RANDOM TEACHER
I want you to go to the Office
JACK
fine
(he French kisses her, then goes inside)
RANDOM TEACHER
oh my
(she smiles)
FADE-OUT
EXT.OFFICE-DAY
(jack walks in to office)
INT.OFFICE-DAY
JACK
hey, I got sent her
RYIN
by who?
JACK
Mr. Stench
RYIN
what did you do?
JACK
(straight faced)
said he had a small dick
RYIN
(while taking a drink, chokes)
you said what?
(about to laugh)
JACK
yeah
RYIN
ser, are you stoned?
JACK
(with squinty BLAZED eyes)
no ser
RYIN
(like his dad)
By golly if your high jack..
JACK
I know I know
RYIN
Okay now go, get
JACK
Okay
(jack gets up very fast and slips out of his sit, then stumbles to get out the door)
EXT.HOUSE-DAY
FADE-IN
JOHNNY
Dude, where have you been?
JACK
School!
JOHNNY
I got the pot-
HANSON
Dude what the hell
PINHALL
No you didn’t
JOHNNY
Okay okay they did
JACK
This your brother tom?
HANSON
Yeah, he’s cool
JACK
Smoke this first
PINHALL
Okay?
(he takes a big hit, then jack hits him in the chest, pinhall starts to choke)
JACK
Feel good?
PINHALL
I feel… horny
JACK
that’s the way to go dude
HASON
heres the weed
JACK
Lets get the weed lit
(Everyone cheers)
SLIDES-OUT
SLIDES-IN
(the hole time they are sitting in a circle and the camera is in the middle and it just goes around and around but simI slow)
STEVEN
Lets get wild
JACK
Dude, everyone’s too high for that
STEVEN
Fine lets take LSD
JOHNNY
Now your talking
ANDREW
I got the radio
(turns on the radio, it does not work)
never mind?
HANSON
Dude you have to watch guru stuff with LSD, no way I’m doing shit like that, so no thanks
PINHALL
Same here dude
JACK
(laughs)
No you don’t
(Hanson & pinhall look at each other and say at same time)
HANSON&PINHALL
You don’t
JOHNNY
Duh…
STEVEN
What are you guys new
(Everyone laughs but pinhall and Hanson they use fake laughs)
(they all take LSC paper)
PINHALL
Dude, I feel weird, am I shaking?
HANSON
Me too, wow look rainbow cave
ANDREW
(twitch’s like a bird)
What, what, what, what, what, what was that?
STEVEN
Life is a road, I want to write!
JOHNNY
(scream’s)
JACK
Dude…dude…dude…dude…DUDE, we need to do some thing
PINHALL
Help me I’m drowning
(flaps arms like doggy style)
HANSON
Like what unicorn?
ANDREW
A unicorn! Where?
STEVEN
The big blue sky, …that’s… what …we ..should do
JOHNNY
Water?
JACK
Dude no not swimming
PINHALL
We should go to heaven
HANSON
No I don’t want to go to hell
STEVEN
…what?
JOHNNY
Jack, you should call Elena!
JACK
I should?
JOHNNY
Yeah you haven’t talked to her in over so long
PINHALL
He’s right
HANSON
Invite her over
STEVEN
Why do we all say dude? What’s the meaning of it?
JOHNNY
Are you gonna call or not?
JACK
Yeah
(jack goes in the house)
INT. HOUSE-DAY
JACK
hello
ELENA
Hello
JACK
Hey its jack
ELENA
Hi jack
JACK
Hey you wanna come over?
ELENA
Yeah, but I have no car
JACK
that’s okay I’ll come pick you up… where do I pick you up at?
ELENA
Umm… meet me at the viper room
JACK
Okay, I’m going now
ELENA
Alright, byee
JACK
Bye
(jack hangs up the phone, then walks out in a weird way)
EXT. CAR-DAY
JACK
Hey guys?
JOHNNY
….What?
JACK
Come’on
HANSON
Where are we going?
JACK
We have’to go pick her up
INT. CAR-DAY
PINHALL
Where are we going?
JACK
The viper room
PINHALL
What’s that?
JACK
It’s a club
HANSON
Wow, a club
JACK
Wow you guys really are new
PINHALL
No!
JACK
(laughs)
FADES-OUT
EXT. CAR-DAY
FADES-IN
The care pulls up to the club there is no site of Elena
Jack gets out the care
EXT. CLUB-DAY
JACK
…where the flowers is she?
INT. CAR-DAY
PINHALL
Well maybe she’s still walking
EXT. CLUB-DAY
JACK
Yeah maybe
INT. CAR-DAY
Pinhall looks at Hanson in a weary way
PINHALL
(whispers)
Did she call you?
HANSON
(whispers)
No, I thought she called you!
PINHALL
(Whispers)
tell jack to go in the room
HANSON
(Whisper’s)
Okay…Why?
PINHALL
(Whisper’s)
So we can call her
HANSON
(Whisper’s)
Oh…k
PINHALL
Well?
EXT. CLUB-DAY
JACK
Well what?
INT. CAR-DAY
PINHALL
…tom has something to say!
HANSON
She might be in…the club
EXT. CLUB-DAY
JACK
Your right
(jack goes into the room)
INT. CAR-DAY
PINHALL
Okay go go go go
HANSON
Hold on I have to start it…There
EXT. CAR-DAY
PINHALL
Go
(they speed off to find a phone)
FADES-OUT
FADES-IN
EXT. CAR-DAY
Show the car pull up to phone
INT. CAR-DAY
HANSON
Go call
PINHALL
…okay
(Pinhall gets out of the car and runs to the phone)
HASON
We really are stoned BIG time
EXT. PHONE-DAY
PINHALL
(smiles the hole time)
Dude I know its so weird
(Pinhall grabs the phone and calls, it rings about four times before fuller picks up)
INT. OFFICE-DAY-2
FULLER
Yellow?
EXT. PHONE-DAY
PINHALL
…what’s up with the color? Its pinhall
INT. OFFICE-DAY-2
FULLER
Oh, what’s wrong?
EXT. PHONE-DAY
PINHALL
Umm.. Jack called Elena!
INT. OFFICE-DAY-2
FULLER
What? What happened
EXT. PHONE-DAY
PINHALL
Nothing bad, its just jack wanted to hang out with Elena and so they where so post to meet up and we haven’t seen her at all
INT. OFFICE-DAY-2
FULLER
What?
EXT. PHONE-DAY
PINHALL
And I .. well me and Hanson wanted to call and see if she called you?
INT. OFFICE-DAY-2
FULLER
I see, no she hasn’t, I’ll give her a call, try the same
EXT. PHONE-DAY
PINHALL
Will do ser
(hangs up)
INT. CAR-DAY
HANSON
So.. Whad’ he say?
EXT. PHONE-DAY
PINHALL
He said I have to call her
HANSON
So…?
PINHALL
Oh she didn’t call
HANSON
Oh
PINHALL
Elena?
ELENA
Yeah?
PINHALL
where are you?
ELENA
I’m walking to the club, why?
PINHALL
Oh its just your not there
ELENA
Who is this?
PINHALL
Pinhall!
ELENA
Oh well I’m on the bus and I will be there in an half an hr, okay?
PINHALL
Where are you I can come pick you up, jack would get really mad to find out you where going to take that long
ELENA
Look to your right!
(pinhall looks to his left)
PINHALL
I don’t see you
ELENA
Your other right
(laughs)
PINHALL
Oh
(Pinhall looks to his right and waves hi)
ELENA
I’m coming hang up
PINHALL
Okay bye
(pinhall walks down the street to go talk to her, and she has one of those old cell phones from the 80’s)
EXT. BUS-DAY
PINHALL
You put an arrow threw my heart
ELENA
(laughs)
Oh what ever
EXT. CAR-DAY
(they walk to the car and get in)
EXT. CLUB-DAY
(Car drives close to the club but backwards then it was when jack left it, jack walks out of the club)
JACK
What in the showers?
HANSON
Umm… Elena’s here!
(smiles)
JACK
Why the CD did you drive my car?
(In a very mad tone)
HANSON
Umm… I didn’t …just turned it around
JACK
(With a stoned look)
Oh, it ain’t no big thang
HANSON
Elena’s here!
JACK
He is or I mean ..she is?
HANSON
(he looks at pinhall like jack is crazy)
Yeah?
JACK
Elena, do you want pot?
ELENA
Sure?
(they get in the car and drive away back to jack’s house)
EXT. CAR-DAY
(the car drives up the house in a slow weary way)
INT. CAR-DAY
JACK
Do any of you see the damn bats?
ELENA
What?
JACK
(says like he might be crazy)
never mind
EXT. CAR-DAY
(they get out of the car)
EXT. HOUSE-DAY
JACK
What are you guys doing?
STEVEN
Nothing!!!
JOHNNY
Yeah, if you call coke-Cain nothing?
JACK
what?
ANDREW
Want some?
JACK
are you guys crazy?
ANDREW
Yes…yes we are.. Well do you?
JACK
Of course, but first give Elena some pot
JOHNNY
You got it boss!
(Johnny gets the big bong out and hands it to jack, then jack holds it to Elena’s lips, then lights the pot)
JACK
suck it
(Elena sucks as hard as she can and she gets a very big hit, then coughs)
ELENA
…woooow
JACK
Yeah?
ELENA
Yeah.. Wait what? Did you ask me something?
JACK
No you did
ELENA
What did I ask you?
JACK
To make out with you
ELENA
Wooow… I did? You read my mind… how did you do that?
JACK
Magic
ELENA
Oh…wait what?
JACK
It’s a type of new pot that is like LSD but not scary
ELENA
Ah waaaw
JACK
(sinners smile)
I know
ELENA
I want to go to sleep…
JACK
I know, don’t though, you’ll miss a trip of a life time
ELENA
can you make me coffee?
JACK
Sure
FADES-OUT
FADES-IN
INT. HOUSE-DAY
(jack walks in to the kitchen and grabs the coffee and OJ, he puts the OJ in on accident then sugar)
EXT. HOUSE DAY
(jack walks out and spills a little, then hands it to Elena)
ELENA
Thaaank yoou
JACK
Hope you like it
(Elena takes a drink)
ELENA
Wow.. This is good but weird… what did you put in it?
JACK
Ummm…. Coffee… sugar… oh and creamer I think it was crème-oh shit… its OJ!
ELENA
Whaat? that’s coool
JACK
You think so?
ELENA
Yeah… its rad
JACK
Glade you think so
(jack slowly kisses Elena in a full on tongue, she pulls his hair and he does the same back, he fills her up, she gets closer to him.
ELENA
Jack I can’t
JACK
Why not?
ELENA
‘cause I wanna go dance
JOHNNY
Jack, there’sss… bugs.. Ever where
JACK
Man you’re a tweeker.. Here try this stuff I’ll make you feel better.. And calm
JOHNNY
Okay…y
(jack gets up and hands Johnny the bong)
JACK
oh dung
PINHALL
yeah?
JACK
try this stuff… you too tom
(everyone takes hits off of it)
(Elena kisses jack, and Hanson gets mad)
HANSON
What in the hell are you doing?
JACK
What?… lets go
FADES-OUT
FADES-IN
INT. CAR-DAY
ELENA
Are we there yet, jack?
JACK
Yeah
EXT. CAR-DAY
The car speeds up real fast then stops right on the curve
(they get out)
EXT. CLUB-DAY
BOBBY
What do you kids think your doing?
JACK
We want to go in the club
BOBBY
You have no ID, you can’t get in…unless
HANSON
Unless what?
BOBBY
You pay… money
JACK
How much?
BOBBY
$100
HANSON
(hands bobby 200 dollars)
I say you have to
BOBBY
Go on in!
(they walk in)
INT. CLUB-DAY
STEVEN
(walks up to a really hot girl)
Hey you want some weed?
HOT GIRL
what?.. Sure
(slimes)
STEVEN
(hands her a pipe.. She smokes a lot, she grabs Stevens neck and trys to take off his paints, she falls then gets back up and just kissis him, there making out)
FADES-OUT
FADES-IN
INT. BAR-DAY
JACK
Hey?
GIRLY
The names girly
GIRLY
(flips her hair)
prpppppp
JACK
are you a hores?
GIRLY
(madly)
What no… I’m leaving
(then she clip clops out the door)
NEEEYYY
JACK
Girly, ne ne ne ne ne, come here
GIRLY
(she clip clops back)
You called?- just so you know I don’t like you
JACK
Here have a carrot
GIRLY
(is already eating on the side of her mouth, half way done)
No
INT. CLUB-DAY
STEVEN
Your so beautiful
HOT GIRL
Just shut up and kiss me
(there making out when her boyfriend shows up)
DRUGY
(yells)
What do you think your doing with my girl?
STEVEN
(Steven gets up fast)
What this is your girl?
DRUGY
your going to die
(screams at him)
STEVEN
(runs to look for jack)
INT. BAR-DAY
STEVEN
Jack we have to go now
JACK
Why?
STEVEN
There’s this guy he’s going kill me
JACK
What did you do?
STEVEN
Got Laid by his girl
JACK
What?
STEVEN
We have to go now!
JACK
Okay okay hold on
DRUGY
(yells)
I’ll kill you
(runs towards Steven,
STEVEN
(Steven run after grabbing jack)
DRUGY
(GRABS Stevens shirt, picks him up and punch’s him in the face, jack punch’s druggy in the tummy, druggy drops Steven)
JACK
Don’t touch me you dame dirty druggy
DRUGY
(try’s to punch Jack, and misses)
JACK
(jack jumps out the way)
hoe
(jack runs to Johnny)
JOHNNY
What the hell dude.. Can’t you see I’m trying to get laid---
(Johnny sees Druggy coming, his eyes go wide)
DRUGY
(try’s to punch Jack again, and misses)
JACK
(jack jumps out the way again)
JOHNNY
(The punch hit’s Johnny)
(Johnny falls to the floor)
STEVEN
(he crawls to the door and gets out)
JACK
(goes to the mic)
Elena, its jack run to the car
( Elena runs to the car, the rest but Andrew see that Jack said that, and so they get in the car too)
FADES-OUT
FADES-IN
INT. CAR-DAY
STEVEN
Holly cow that was in-sane
HANSON
What happened?
STEVEN
Dude, I can’t even remember
JACK
(laughs)
What do you mean you laid some guys girl.. Your stupid
(laughs)
STEVEN
Oh yeah, I didn’t know
JACK
that’s why we’re dudes
(smiles)
FADES-OUT
FADES-IN
INT. HOUSE-DAY
(they wakeup all skated around the living room, jack first then Elena)
ELENA
What happened, jack?
JACK
I can’t remember, just when you took that big hit
ELENA
Nothing?
JACK
No
(Johnny awakes)
JOHNNY
Ah my leg hurts, hey Tom wake up!
HANSON
What?
JOHNNY
Do you remember what happened?
HANSON
Yeah! Why?
JOHNNY
tell me
HANSON
Well…Elena toke that hit… and we went to a club… I hit on this girl… and…I got slapped, that’s all I can remember…hey pinhall do you remember?
PINHALL
I puked
STEVEN
… I think…I think I got laid
JACK
What? never mind. Steven do you remember anything else?
STEVEN
Yeah all
JACK
What happened?
STEVEN
Well you and Elena made out for an hour… then we went to the club and drank, then we crashed here… that’s it
JACK
Oh wow that’s not a lot
HANSON
Don’t we have-to go to school?
JACK
Yeah but… do any of you wanna go?
STEVEN
Not really
HANSON
Me-ether
(jack jumps up in a hurry, to find that there’s the cops at his house)
JACK
(yells)
Holly bubble gum, get up we have to go
(they start to get up, and jack runs out the back door, they are still trying to stand, Andrew is in a deep sleep and Steven got out in time, the cops walk inside)
COP 2
It smells like marijuana in here
COP 1
Where’s that son of a cunttoo, Jack? I got to put a beating in to him
HANSON
On what ground?
COP 2
boy why the hello you talking?
HANSON
I have a right
COP 1
Don’t be a smart donky to me…you been to jail?
HANSON
No… you?
(sinners smile)
(Elena, pinhall and hanson laugh)
COP 2
Hey aren’t you that one young cop who shot your own partner?
HANSON
Me?
COP 2
Yeah you, who else would I be talking to?
HANSON
(worried faced)
No you have to be a pig to be a cop like you
(pinhall and Hanson laugh)
COP 1
(grabs his flash-light and hits Hanson)
HANSON
(Hanson falls to the floor and gets up and the cop2’s face and spits blood on the cops face)
COP 1
(the cop starts to beat him up really bad to the point where Hanson cant get back up)
HANSON
(he does not get up because of weakness’ and fear)
PINHALL
(yells)
You dirty cop, I swear I’ll get you
COP 1
(in anger)
You…Shut-up
PINHALL
You have broken over 6 laws in the passed minute
COP 1
You can’t do no such think, punk
(jack walks in the house)
JACK
We’re no punks, we’re stoners
(all laugh)
Now get out before I call the po po
COP 2
We are the po po
JACK
Fine I’ll call the… FBI
EXT. HOUSE-DAY
COP 1
(walks close to only jack’s ear)
You got a death date
(starts to walk out the door)
You better get your ass to school, jack or what happened to your friend will happen to you
JACK
Don’t worry to much… your getting old
HANSON
(gets up and runs to the cops)
For your info,
(shows his badge)
I am a cop, and I’m going to file a… a… a thing
COP 2
(laughs)
Whered’chou get that thing a candy store?
HANSON
No I got it for my birthday… where do you think?
COP 2
(he hits Hanson on the face)
HANSON
(he falls like he got slapped)
(yells in anger)
You flak’n dirty cop
JACK
Are you okay tom? You look bad
HANSON
‘cause I’m a bad-ass, yeah I’m okay just light-headed
(he gets up and walks in a weird way)
JACK
Get in the car you need to see somebody
HANSON
I don’t need you to worry for me, I‘m all right, I don’t want to tell me what to do ether
JACK
Dude…dude…dude look at your face
HANSON
I can’t I don’t have a mirror
JACK
……I’ll take a photo of you
(jack goes inside and grabs his camera then takes a photo)
HANSON
What?
JACK
Got it, look
HANSON
I look bad… alright take me to the doc
JACK
Okay
FADES-OUT
INT. CAR-DAY
(the song pressure is playing in the back)
HANSON
Hey jack?
JACK
yeah?
HANSON
I was wondering who’s all your family?
JACK
(laughs)
Why do you wanna know?
HANSON
I don’t know
JACK
Well I have two little sisters, a older brother and my dad doesn’t live with us, just my mom… and my pet
HANSON
What’s his name?
JACK
Umm.. Grandpa… why?
HANSON
your dads name is Grandpa?
JACK
What no, that’s my cats name… no my dads name is Davie
HANSON
Why would any one name there cat grampa… your weird… what about your mother?
JACK
Umm… her name is Victoria Rose, but her friends call her V Ann
HANSON
that’s weird… does she know?
JACK
Know what?
HANSON
that you do drugs?
JACK
…yeah… okay we’re here… get out
HANSON
how?
JACK
(smiles)
What?… here
EXT. CAR-DAY
JACK
Can you walk?
HANSON
No… yeah
EXT. DOCTOR-DAY
(they walk in the doc’s office)
INT. DOCTOR-DAY
JACK
Doc this guy is hurt… badly.. Can you help him?
DOCTOR
I see, this guy needs help bad, he has to stay for a day, you have to leave, you can come pick him up tomorrow
JACK
Okay?
(jack walks out the door)
EXT. CAR-DAY
(show jack walking to his car and get in)
INT. CAR-DAY
(jack sits there for 10 sec, then starts the car)
EXT. CAR-DAY
(show jack driving away)
INT. CAR-DAY
(show jack driving)
JACK
Dimmit
EXT. CAR-DAY
(jack pulls up to his house)
INT. CAR-DAY
(jack puts his head on the wheel and just stays there for 5 sec then gets up and screams) the camera backs away out the closed car window threw the top of the tree and shows the whole area
FADES-OUT
FADES-IN
INT.21STREET-DAY
PINHALL
Fuller, I need to talk to you about this cop
FULLER
What cop? What would you need to talk to me about something else that’s not in your case
PINHALL
that’s the thing.. This cop beat up Hanson, to the point that his in the hospital.
FULLER
What? …Okay I want you to watch this guy real close.. .another thing…What do you got on Jack so far?
PINHALL
He just saved people from getting beat up, and he’s mostly just a pot head,…we need to go talk to Hanson to get more on the guy
FULLER
I’m starting to think that cop is thee guy…
PINHALL
Yeah me too
FULLER
Well… we better go ask Hanson what happened
PINHALL
Your right
FADES-OUT
FADES-IN
INT. DOCTOR-DAY
PINHALL
Dude… are you okay…I need to take a shit really badly
HANSON
Wait what?
PINHALL
Nothing!
HANSON
Are you high?
PINHALL
I had an assignment!…I had-to
HANSON
Fuller?…
FULLER
What Hanson?
HANSON
It’s the apple!
FULLER
What is?
HANSON
its wall from the china
FULLER
Really?
HANSON
… I mean it’s the tree at the Adam eve time,,, the apple! think about it the stem is the space to god, the core is hells and all different hells, the top is the crust, and the mid it is the mid
FILLER
Woow, who gave Hanson weed?
JACK
I did!
FULLER
Did you here everything…So you know who he is
(pints at tom)
JACK
(laughs, , says like his stupid)
Yeah I know who tom is
FULLER
Do you know who this is too?
(Points at dung)
JACK
(laughs, says like he’s stupid)
Duh... Even you do
FULLER
Who am I then
JACK
Your there step dad.. Elena told me all about it
FULLER
Hanson you better feel lucky your in a bed
JACK
Why would you say that to your sun
FULLER
that your not worse
JACK
Oh that makes sense… nice to met you finally… sorry about him high, I didn’t want him to have pain, and I had the chouse sense I was here
FULLER
Understand.. Can we have a talk together?
JACK
Sure
FULLER
Jack I was asking you to leave
JACK
Oh, well okay
(he walks away in a sad happy face)
FULLER
What do you know about jack ,Hanson?
HANSON
Well he’s a good person and he’s a big pot-head not really the bad guy I think it’s the cop that got me good
FULLER
So do I
FADES-OUT
FADES-IN
INT. HOUSE-DAY　
RUZE
Hey jack?
JACK
Yeah ruze
RUZE
I don’t feel good
JACK
Are you hot?
RUZE
Noo
(she barfs, then falls)
JACK
What!
(he puts her on the sofa)
RUZE
I don’t like Elena, and tom and dung, there really weird
JACK
Yeah you think so, why don’t you try talking to them and get to know before you judge…
RUZE
But… jack.. I’m scared there’ll beat me up, or make fun of me
JACK
Hey ruze.. You’re my little sister… nothings going to happen
RUZE
Hey jack?
JACK
Yeah
RUZE
Can… I try.. Some… weed
JACK
Umm…
RUZE
So I feel.. Better
JACK
What the hell… sure
(he gets out the bong and she takes a hit like she was a pro)
JACK
Holly monkey, have you done this before?
RUZE
Umm… I’m in high school ant I?
JACK
Yeah... but… who?
RUZE
Umm… one of your friends!
JACK
Oh… why one of my friends?
RUZE
Well cause your friends with all the weed smokers
JACK
(smiles)
…witch one?
RUZE
Jack didn’t you tell me not to snitch?
JACK
Yeah but you’re my sis and there my friend.. .I wanted to be the first one to watch you being high you know?
RUZE
Jack come on. You really thought you where going to be the first waiting that long?
JACK
Well kind of
(smiles)
RUZE
(smiles, laughs)
Thank you
JACK
your welcome… now don’t flirt with dung tonight
RUZE
What I’m going to met him tonight?
JACK
Yeah
(itches head)
well it’s the only time.. Okay?
RUZE
k
JACK
…well… I have to go pick him up now, I’ll be back in a half
(jack walks out the door)
FADES-OUT
FADES-IN
EXT. CAR-DAY
(jack gets in the car and drives away)
FADES-OUT
FADES-IN
EXT. CAR-DAY
(the car drives up and parks tom and dung get out of the car, dung helps tom when he slips)
EXT. HOUSE-DAY
They all go in
INT. HOUSE-DAY　
RUZE
Jack? Is that you?
JACK
Yeah I brought tom too
RUZE
(blush’s)
You did?
HANSON
Umm… hi
(smiles, then blushes)
RUZE
Hi
(smiles)
JACK
Wow you two look good together… to bad nothing’s going to happen, right tom?
HANSON
Uh… what?
JACK
(whispers to Hanson and Pinhall)
don’t mess with her
PINHALL
you got it
HANSON
…
JACK
(yells)
Tom?
(laughs)
HANSON
Oh yeah.. yeah
JACK
I have to go
PINHALL
Where are you going?
JACK
I have to go get meds
PINHALL & HANSON
Oooh
(jack walks out)
RUZE
So what do you guys do?
HANSON
Well we just hang out… you?
RUZE
Umm… I go to school and other stuff… dung will you get me some food?
PINHALL
um yeah… sure
(he gets up and goes)
RUZE
I like you tom
HANSON
You like me?… like, like like?
RUZE
Yeah… come here I want to tell you something
(Hanson leans really close.)
I had 3 big bong hits
(she tries to kiss him but he gets out of the way)
HANSON
What are you thinking? You want me to die?
RUZE
No I just want to see how you taste
HANSON
(gets wierd)
…Your great looking and all I just don’t want to die… and that was thee hottest thing any girl has ever said to me before just so you know…
RUZE
…Well… good
(she pulls him really close, have the cam show just Hanson and make it look like they did kiss)
PINHALL
what are you doing tom?
HANSON
(stops kissing her)
Umm… she pulled me
PINHALL
What? She’s his sister, and she’s under age
HANSON
She is… you are?
RUZE
Man, like it matters
HANSON
…
RUZE
Does it matter?
HANSON
Uh… yeah
RUZE
What ever
(she pulls him close and barely kisses him)
HANSON
I said no
RUZE
Wow your such a girl
HANSON
Well… your such a guy
PINHALL
What?…. Hey mahafradites
HANSON
What?
PINHALL
Jacks back
JACK
What happened dung?
PINHALL
Nothing…
JACK
Tom?
HANSON
(with a face looking like, I am busted to hell)
….What?
JACK
Why was dung calling you and my sis that?
HANSON
‘Cause jack…she looked down my paints…and I did the same to her…and we found out…that she has a dick…and I don’t
JACK
What.. Why I odda-
HANSON
Jack! I was just kidding
JACK
…oh… well here’s the meds ruze
RUZE
Thanks jack…. Tom?
HANSON
(worried, sounds like he‘s about to cry)
What!!
JACK
What the hell is wrong with you?
HANSON
(crying like a girl)
Nothing… I’m just sad.
(he runs out the door)
JACK
Ruze?
RUZE
What?
JACK
What happened?
RUZE
Nothing, well we did talk about my age but that’s it!… oh and what he does!
JACK
what?!
PINHALL
(makes something up)
example: (well his elephant just died! It was so sad I was at its funeral!)
JACK
Oh. Okay that’s weird, so Dung?
PINHALL
Wha’
JACK
Lets go to school!
PINHALL
What, are you sure?
JACK
Yeah, I’m sure
PINHALL
Okay let’s go then.
JACK
Um…wait…
PINHALL
(smiles)
You change your mind?
JACK
…no, Ruze if you need anything just call mom.
RUZE
Okay jack.
(jack walks out the door first then followed by pinhall)
EXT. HOUSE-DAY
(jack walks to his car)
EXT. CAR-DAY
(pinhall get’s in then jack walks to the driver side and get‘s in)
INT. CAR-DAY
(jack starts the car, and puts some song on)
PINHALL
So… we’re really gonna go?
JACK
Yeah, why?
PINHALL
Um.. Just.. Wondering…
(pinhall looks out the window)
JACK
Where might Tom gone to?
PINHALL
He’s not going to come.
JACK
Who says?
PINHALL
…I don’t know…oh my gosh have you herd this?
(pinhall turns it up real lound)
JACK
(yells)
No who is it?
PINHALL
(yells)
It’s the who’
JACK
(yells)
No… I said… who is it?
PINHALL
(yells)
The who
JACK
(turns I down alittle)
I said who is it? Whats the name?
PINHALL
the who
JACK
who?
PINHALL
The who
JACK
oh my gosh who is this?
PINHALL
It’s the who
JACK
Who?
PINHALL
the who
JACK
(yells)
The who?
PINHALL
yeah
JACK
What?
PINHALL
The name of the band is the who.
JACK
Why are you asking me? I thought you knew.
PINHALL
I do, it’s the who
JACK
(rolls eye’s, yells)
Stop asking me who it is---
PINHALL
(calm fast)
---oh look it’s Tom!
JACK
(fast)
Where?
PINHALL
(laughs)
Stop the car.
JACK
(sarcastic)
Okay’ boss
EXT. CAR-DAY
(stops the car)
PINHALL
Get in
(shows hanson get in)
FADES-OUT
FADES-IN
EXT.SCHOOL-DAY
(its lunch time, everyone is eating, jack tom dung are walking in the school)
JACK
Did school just start?
HANSON
I think so…
(hanson looks at pinhall and laughs quietly)
INT. HALLWAY-DAY
JACK
Why is everyone not in class yet?
HANSON
(hanson looks at pinhall and laughs quietly again)
Maybe it’s lunch time!
JACK
---what?…oh my gosh I think your right-we need a late slip.
PINHALL
Oh look he’s a over achever now
(hanson and pinhall laugh)
INT.OFFICE-DAY
FAKE OFFICE GUY
Hey what can I do your you?
PINHALL
What happen to the old lady?
FAKE OFFICE GUY
(like he’s the coolest)
Um… she’s… gone, sorry boy you have to go threw me now,
JACK
Okay can we get late notes?
FAKE OFFICE GUY
Um
(nuvis)
sure, I can do that, its around here somewhere
(laughs, looks around for the notes, and runs around the room looking for the notes and slips, get up fast)
I’m okay I just.. Oh god that’s blood I knew it, I knew something like this would happen on my first day
(looks up at jack)
um…
(smiles)
just go see the printable.
As they walk
FAKE OFFICE GUY
Oh god I knew it I knew, why did I do this my gosh it hurts it hurts.
INT. OFFICE-DAY-2
(show’s jack and them walk in his office)
RYIN
What are you doing here?
HANSON
Um..
(smiles nevisly)
RYIN
Young sir do I know you?
HANSON
No, no not at all
RYIN
But I thought we just had a talk about 21 dope street?
HANSON
Nop--nop we didn’t,
(shaks his head no fast)
RYIN
Oh… sorry?!
ELENA
Hey gimmy I got the paper’s for the case!
(smiles)
RYIN
(points at his eye)
ELENA
(see’s jack and poses’s)
JACK
Elena? Is that you?
ELENA
Yeah!
JACK
Where have you been?
ELENA
Well I just got back
JACK
tom… he said you wend to Washington for a week!
ELENA
I had to come back, I missed you
JACK
, I missed you too…
(looks at her eye’s, then kiss’s her)
well Ryin, I need a late note.
RYIN
Um okay,
(he writes Pinhall’s then Hanson, they leave)
JACK
Um sir?
RYIN
I need to talk before you go
JACK
Oh.. Kay?!
ELENA
(wines)
Can you just give him a break for once?
RYIN
What?
(Elena gives him a look, like why are you trying to get him to stay)
RYIN
Uh.. Yeah
JACK
(justers, yes)
Thank you god! I love you Elena
(French kiss’s her, then hugs her real tight, then grabs the note then dash’s off)
ELENA
Oh my gosh I thought I was busted for sure. Thank you
RYIN
Yeah, now that case
ELANA
(walks up to ryin and get’s real close, hands it to him but holds it still)
I really mean thank you
RYIN
Well…
(looks in her eye’s)
ELENA
(lets go, he grabs her hand)
What?
RYIN
Um…do you think your able to cech this guy?
ELENA
Yeah, I know we will
RYIN
I really loved her, thank you
(Elena smiles then walks out)
FADES-OUT
FADES-IN
INT.OFFICE-DAY
FAKE OFFICE GUY
Oh hey
ELENA
or not the office girl, what are you doing
FAKE OFFICE GUY
Now don’t talk to me you’re a kid
ELENA
No… I’m a cop
FAKE OFFICE GUY
Um nothing what are you doing um nothing just going to go finish cleaning the boys bathroom, okay bye
ELENA
(laughs, walks off)
INT. HALLWAY-DAY
(Elena walks out the door)
FADES-OUT
EXT. HALLWAY-DAY
(show pinhall and jack and also hason messing around before going to class)
INT. CLASS-DAY
(They three walk in, thay are standing by the door, and the teacher Mr. stench is talking about the cover still)
JACK
Well I guess I didn’t miss anything
MR. STENCH
What do you mean sir?
JACK
Well…Your still talking about having a cover!
MR. STENCH
Sir--do you have a note?
JACK
Yeah, in the matter of fact, I do this time
(hanson and pinhall put there note’s in the air, to show the teacher)
MR. STENCH
Well…
JACK
Well what?
(everyone laughs)
MR. STENCH
Well give me the note
JACK
Oh I thought you’s was’a, supost to come’a get it
(everyone laughs)
MR. STENCH
Get over here right now
JACK
Okay okay
(jack give’s him the note)
JACK
What is that sick smell… eww…
(a few are laughing)
(smell’s mr. stench)
(more laugh)
MR. STENCH
What are you doing?
JACK
Ewww… it’s you… I can see why your name is mr. stench now..is that lip stick?
(everyone busts up laughing)
MR. STENCH
(, he wipes his lips and in a mad way)
I don’t know what your talking about--Jack… go take a sit
(jack goes finds a seat next to a red neck)
(jack looks at him in a mean way)
MR. STENCH
(to hanson and pinhall)
Note’s?
PINHALL
Here you go
HANSON
Here
(they are all separated)
JACK
(looks really high.. Stears at coner)
CONER
(looks at jack)
Hey baaa…baaaa….
(laughs)
Baaaa
JACK
Hey, I know you secret--
CONER
What secret?
JACK
No no don’t worry!, I wont tell
CONER
What secret?
JACK
you’re a sheep farmer, I’ll keep your secret though, you can trust me
CONER
What are you talking about you nigger
JACK
(gets mad)
The Irish secret, you know the, the sheep farmer one!
CONER
What is it!
JACK
You know, the secret… why you wear kilts!
CONER
I don’t know what your talking about
JACK
You wanna know it? Its cause… sheep are… afrad of.. zippers!
CONER
(with the most straight face ever, just looks ahead)
JACK
(puts a hand on Coner‘s shoulder, and tightens his hand)
(whispers in his ear)
Its okay coner mclide, I wont tell.. You big old kid
CONER
(with a scared face)
JACK
(laughs)
(the camera scans to the right of the screen to where hanson is)
HANSON
(to a chick)
Hey!
(he’s eye brows go up and down)
(the camera scans to the right of the screen to where pinhall is)
PINHALL
(to a geek)
Hey dude, you want some dope?
GEEK
Um no! are you insane?
PINHALL
Just a little
(laughs)
(the camera pans to mr. stench talking)
MR. STENCH
and when the \cover is covered right no one will know who you wanna be or who you are, you can be anyone you want to, you can kill a cop, as you can see here. Now do we have any question‘s?
JACK
(razes his hand)
MR. STENCH
Yes, Jack greens?
JACK
Yeah what do you know about… marijuana?
MR.STENCH
Um I do not believe that is okay to talk about in school, Mr. greens.
JACK
Well then what do you know about hemp?
MR.STENCH
Well it is not weed if you think so,
it is something you can make cloths
out of and paper, the strongest type too,
way better then cotton and I also think we
as the USA should grow hemp for those
reasons
JACK
I don’t think you know any thing about pot, do you?
MR.STENCH
Well I think I know more then you do, mr. Greens
JACK
No you don’t!
MR.STENCH
Yes I do
JACK
Well then Ill quiz you
MR.STENCH
Fine
JACK
Is dope weed?
MR.STENCH
Yes
JACK
Your wrong, it’s a trick one--
MR.STENCH
--I’m not done!, it is weed mixed
with meth or something else I cant
remember… anything else?
JACK
Yes…would you pick Eddie or Van Helen?
MR.STENCH
Both, because there the same
JACK
I have a whole new respect for you now, you wanna talk after school, if you know what I mean!
MR.STENCH
(smiles)
Ah, yes, we can talk about homework after school
FADES-OUT
FADES-IN
EXT. SCHOOL-DAY
(show that no one is at the school but jack and stench)
INT. CLASSROOM-DAY
(show jack blowing out smoke)
MR. STENCH
What’s your favorite movie?
JACK
Fear and Loathing In Los Vegas
MR. STENCH
Mine too, I just think that Johnny depp guy played the role so smoothly…just the way he walks was so.. You know? and the way he said the lines..
(thinks like he’s wrong)
Yeah!..
JACK
Oh yeah that good old Johnny depp, don’t you just love it.. But I think we have a problem
MR.STENCH
What is that jack?
JACK
This is a continuity error…. The movie was not made till the 90’s and we are in the 80’s
MR.STENCH
No one will know, everyone one who’s watching this is stoned out of there minds
JACK
Are you sure?
(they both look in to the camera and get very close)
MR. STENCH AND JACK
Are you?
(back to the way it was)
JACK
Am I what?
MR. STENCH
(looks in the camera, and gives the allusion that everyone is strapped in a LSD box)
Are you trapped in a box?
(have him do the hand thing and then it goes all blurry, and colorful
INT. COUCH-DAY
(Show some video’s of them watching the movie fear and loathing)
(blur into the words)
FADES-OUT
FADE-INTO WHITE
(start the camera with the car battery, a white part)
(jack is on the floor and stench took the couch)
(stench is snoring)
JACK
(gets up)
Um where am I?
Stench? Wake up, man!
MR. STENCH
Mmmm… What?
JACK
Dude, work, school!
MR. STENCH
Huh.. What what, am I late?
JACK
No I just was seeing if you can hear me, there’s no school
MR. STENCH
Oh…do you want some LSD?
JACK
Wow… your hard core for a teach
MR. STENCH
(laughs)
I know… here
(he hands Jack some, and he takes it)
JACK
Dude I had a dream like this one time… hey I’ll be back I have to take this battery fixed.. The wipers
MR. STENCH
…Okay
(stench lays back down)
(jack grabs the battery and walks out)
EXT. STENCH-DAY
(he walks out and looks at the house)
INT. SIDEWALK-DAY
(the camera is close up or eye view of jack, never mid or long)
(3-D photo’s of sunflower’s and birds are around him)
(the camera is slowly spinning up side down, a lot of pretty things float around him)
(Some kids break a window)
(jack starts to see really scary stuff like the grugh, for about 2 minutes, then it breaks, and he starts to walk in a weird way, like leaning forward)
(the walk side is looking longer then shorter)
(jack is walking and the battery juice is dripping down his sweatshirt)
(he falls… then crawls to the next block, then gets back up and he walks one more block, he is sweating like piggy on a very very hot day)
EXT. BILLS-SHOP-DAY
(he get to a battery place, and crawls across the street to the counter)
JACK
Just have to get to the other side
(breathing deep)
INT. BILLS-SHOP-DAY
(jack pounds on the counter the guy bill turns around, he looks like the guy from fear and loathing, goza)
(jack makes a weird face)
BILL
Can I help you with something?
JACK
(scard out of his mind, says)
I don’t know can you?
Um.. I know you.. You’re the fear guy!
BILL
I do not know what your talking about
JACK
(jack see’s his face turn into the devil)
(screams)
(jack hinds on the other side of the counter, and mumbles)
I need a new battery
BILL
What was that?
JACK
(gets up in the guys face and yells)
I need a new battery… you you dick head
(jack see’s that he is the devil and hides again)
BILL
Okay that will be 200 dollor’s
JACK
Are you insane that too much.. How about 700?
(he hands him 500 and a 100)
this is all I got, please …let me go!
BILL
Your free to go, here is your change
JACK
(to him self)
I was still hiding at that time, the dam devil was trying to make me a deal to take my soul
(yells)
No I don’t want to change into your evil back robe!
(to him self)
I must get out of here
(to bill)
I don’t want your dam blood money, no deal
(jack grabs the new battery an runs out)
CUTS-OUT
CUTS-IN
INT. STENCH-DAY
MR. STENCH
Where is he? its been 3hr’s
(jack walks in the door)
JACK
Dude I just had the weirdest day ever
MR. STENCH
Really? Like what?
JACK
Well I met the devil, and there was this old lady and this hot on and this bear, his name was smoky, so I asked him if he wanted to smoke right now, and he called the cops, and they came but I ran, and I got way, and then I…
(stops talking for 10 sec)
MR. STENCH
Then what?
JACK
I smoked some more pot, then I saw the cops then they patted me down, but I smoked it all so they had nothn on me!
(smiles)
MR. STENCH
Weird day!
JACK
I know
MR. STENCH
Are you still going to go to the concert tonight?
JACK
Yes I am
MR. STENCH
You might wanna get ready then, you have only 10 minutes to get there
JACK
Oh coconut.. Just one more ting!
(up till this right here its been close ups on mr. stench for this scene)
MR. STENCH
What?
JACK
Why are you wearing a bra?
MR. STENCH
(thinks oh shit)
I don’t… know--you have to go
SLDES-OUT
CUTS-IN
EXT. CONCERT-DAY
(jack and steven and johnny, hanson and pinhall and Elena walk in the concert)
INT. CONCERT-DAY
(camera pans slowly over head to an employee putting up light, one other is putting up letter’s on a sign, marquee sign. Standing on a long ladder. Maruqee reads” snookie on a smokerz productions presents deep purple, , bob marlyn, one night only”)
　
　
　
　
JACK
Where is daisey?
STEVEN
Uh dunno,man
JOHNNY
She said, she said that she would meet us here at six, man
ELENA
Who’s that?
JACK
My hippie friend. Dam.. Dude the show is gonna start any time soon, I wanna get front row seats.
PINHALL
This is gonna be a groovy show
(hanson looks at pinhall like he’s crazy to say that)
HANSON
I want front row too, man
JACK
I hear Santana might show up
JOHNNY
No way, where did you hear that?
PINHALL
Yeah he rocks like a hot tamale
(laughs)
(hanson looks again at pinhall like he’s crazy)
HANSON
What did you watch?
PINHALL
Not too much… why?
HANSON
Why are you talking like that?
(laughs)
(pinhall glars at hanson)
JACK
You two guys are weird… wait here, theres a pay phone, I gotta call aisey, I’m worrieng about her
(jack walks to it and is asking for change)
JACK
Any spare change?
(chicks with long and short dress’s shuffle by, winos mumble to them selves)
(the ring goes and no one answer’s, he rolls a quarter over his knuckles impatiently)
STEVEN
Hey man the lines moving, did you call her? Where is she?
JACK
No
JOHNNY
All chicks like that are always late…here have a hit of this
(jack takes the hit)
JACK
What is this?
JOHNNY
This is some real cool refer
JACK
Cool, I need some, I cant stop thinking
DOOR MAN
Ticket’s?! tickets?!
( thay hand it to the door man)
(they enter to stoplights, psychedelic and flourestescent light shows a blaze)
ELENA
Wow this is so dope
STEVEN
I think I see god
(it’s a guy with a beard and a hippie)
JACK
God? What man?
(steven points)
JOHNNY
Oh my god, it’s you!
JACK
Oh that hairy dude? That ant god.. that’s just some hairy dude… he’s the rabi from the synagog
(laughs)
What did you two take, man?
JOHNNY
We got turned on to some purple micro dot and some orange sunshine by some cool chicks, don’t worry I saved you one…here man
JACK
Alright, nice, I was hoping to get real high tonight
STAGEGUY
Dudes and babes… we gotta super show for ya tonight.. We have led zeplin, eddie van helan, bob marlyn, the kids, ozzy, zz top, ratt, thin lizzy, deep purple, meny meny more so just sit back and smoke that weed or what ever you want to inhail, the heavy metal grooves, all the way from England lets give ‘em a warm or should I say a hot American welcome, deep purple!!!
(“smoke on the water” blares from the P.A. system, purple fog fills the stage)
CUTS-OUT
CUTS-IN
INT. BACKSTAGE-DAY
(show a lot of the rockers doing cock and pot and all that fun stuff, kissing groupies)
(there’s a moshpit)
JACK
Man this is so cool!
JOHNNY
Look that chick is jumping on stage! I can see your thongs flower child!
(laughs)
STEVEN
Even with one eye, he can see more ass then most see with two
(laughs)
JACK
(laughs)
hey Elena, all you! I have to take a leak
You I’ll stay Right here, keep an eye out for daisey..
STEVEN
Sure thing, but if johnny does that he’ll miss the show.
(laughs)
JOHNNY
Funny, dude’s funny… I am the eye in the sky watching chicks get high…
JACK
Yeah man let me open my fly
(laughs)
Be right back, seriously don’t move
CUTS-OUT
SLIDES-IN
INT. BARS-DAY
(a stumbling stoner bumps into jack)
STONER
Hey, man… is that the who?
JACK
The who!, no man, that’s bob marlyn
(jack waits at the bar to order some food, he sees a cool loking guy about 50, grey afro, love beads, head band,, lether fringe jacket brown, and black pants, snake skin boots with peace sighns)
JACK
Hey man, I like your threads, its psycedelic man
SNOOKIE
Peace man, thanks
(snookie ignores jack)
JACK
I mean you got he grooviest style
SNOOKIE
Snookie smokes, man my pleasure
(shaks hands, snookie gives the peace sign)
JACK
Jack greens man, nice to meet you snookie
SNOOKIE
So… you enjoying my club jack?
JACK
Ooh yeah man… this club is truckin like two dogs fluckin
(both laughs)
SNOOKIE
Say… where you from jack?
JACK
From here snooks.. Down the rode on 21 dope street, but you know there’s always those dirty cops there, you know?
SNOOKIE
You mean 21st street, don’t you?
JACK
Yeah with all those freaks and geeks
(laughs)
SNOOKIE
Say.. I kinda like you jack
JACK
don’t we all?!
SNOOKIE
…you wanna come backstage and see what its really like as a rock star?
JACK
You mean for real?
SNOOKIE
Yeah man… why not…come’on
FADES-OUT
EXT. BACKSTSAGE-DAY
SNOOKIE
I’ll show you around my joint
(snookie takes jack past groupies with shaggy hair cuts and red full lips, throwing kiss’s at jack and snookie)
(snookie opens his door room)
(there are posters of rock stars, snookie pulls out a coke pipe)
SNOOKIE
You want some, man?
JACK
Sure
SNOOKIE
(hands jack the pipe)
Peruvian flake, the best n town
JACK
(sniff’s it)
Wow, that’s a kick
SNOOKIE
Better then draino, huh jack?
(BOB MARLY bursts in, the song purple haze starts to play)
BOB MARLY
Hey man you got a hit for a brother?
SNOOKIE
Have a hit? Yeah man I do Jimi, you did a groovy show tonight...you deserve it!
(bob takes a hit)
BOB MARLY
Yeah I was trying to pull the stars from the purple haze. The midnight blue… you get me?
JACK
Umm…
SNOOKIE
This… is jack greens
BOB MARLY
Man I like your last name.. nice to meet you, I’m bob marly my brother
JACK
Umm.. Yeah.. Uh …thanks
(smiles big)
BOB MARLY
(laughs)
Nice well…I get that a lot just relax.. See you in 20...
I gotta catch me some pussy cats!
SNOOKIE
Hey jbob, I sent your check to your agent,
thanks for doing me this favor, it got sold out…in one day
JACK
(to snookie secretly)
Man… I don’t know what to say to him!
SNOOKIE
Star struck huh?
JACK
(smiles)
Yeah…this is so raid, man.. I’ll never forget this… how can I ever repay you?
SNOOKIE
No bother my man
(jack takes another hit)
INT. CONCERT-DAY
JOHNNY
(to hanson)
Where the truck is jack at?
HANSON
I don’t know… why would I know?
PINHALL
Maybe he drowned in the can?!
(laughs)
STEVEN
This is serious.. I hope he ant trippin balls, that micro dot is some heavy stuff, and he took two!
HANSON
Oh shit I took three.. I thought it was for head acks
ELENA
I took four..
STEVEN
How did you get four?
ELENA
This boy gave them to me.. He said it would make me feel better..
STEVEN
When was this?
ELENA
Before the show
FADES TO B&W
EXT. CONCERT-DAY
ELENA
Hey tom, do you have any aleav?
HANSON
No
PINHALL
(to junker, do you have any med’s for head’s)
JUNKER
Uh.. Yyeah, heres 10, there weak, so take a lot
(evil smile)
PINHALL
Okay I got some.. There weak
ELENA
Oh okay give me four then
(hands her 4 hands hanson takes 3 and so does pinhall)
ELENA
They look funny
PINHALL
I know its al okay though, its new
INT. CONCERT-DAY
FADES BACK TO COLOR
STEVEN
Oh wow… I hope you don’t tripp to much.. You have 20 minutes tell you go weird
ELENA
What?!
JOHNNY
Dude… jack is missing a great show
FADES TO OTHER SCENE
INT. BACK STAGE-DAY
JACK
Is that you in the newspaper picture’s?
SNOOKIE
that’s me on the sax with chuck berry, I played session work for the stax records ane a couple of labels, with litle rickard and kats like sam and dave, otis reding Aretha franklin, bo didley, elvis presley.. Ect
JACK
Wow
I have no idea what you are talking about!
SNOOKIE
(laughs)
So you met any one with fame like that?
JACK
Me? No way man, I’m just a party hardy guy from the poor side of town
SNOOKIE
(pulls out a weed pipe and takes a hit, hands it to jack he takes one too)
(a diyan walks in, and sits next to jack)
SNOOKIE
Seen some hard times too, my man
(jack pases the pipe to diyan)
Hello beautiful
DYAN
Hey smokes..
(looks at jack)
Hey big boy
JACK
Hey
SNOOKIE
You can’t go back and do it over son, but you sure as hell can go forward, and make it better… may be that’s why I brought you back here.
JACK
Did you?
(dyan leaves the room)
SNOOKIE
Did I?
I don’t know son
To show you can do it, I saw you playing at rorys steak house. That honky tonk gig with the ruffled shirts just ant you
JACK
It was just for some bread so I can come here
(snookie talks over jack)
SNOOKIE
You got some good talent, I can smell it.
JACK
You can smell it?
SNOOKIE
Yes I can smell it, but who’s gonna believe in you if you don’t even believe in yourself.
JACK
You have been smoking too much, but I feel yeah man
SNOOKIE
Hug a brotha’
JACK
(jack jumps up and hugs him like a father)
Even my father never talked to me like that.
(they stop hugging)
He just yell and hit things
SNOOKIE
That what a father does
(jack starts to cry)
when he gives up hope for his kids .. Or maybe he’s really saying is, you think you’re a loser but I think my sons a winner who has not found the kay yet… just reverse the psychology and start the new journey, jack
JACK
Man I mean
(chocks up)
I mean just so right on, I don’t know what to say
(takes a hit)
Peace and love brother snookie, love ya man, I really mean it
(pat benatar bursts in)
PAT BENATAR
(gravely voice)
Hey snookie, where ya keep the good stuff
(she looks at jack and winks)
SNOOKIE
Uh yeah
PAT BENATAR
(to jack)
Hey baby, wanna have a mama rock you in the cradle?
(the song rock you in the cradle, plays in the back)
SNOOKIE
(winks, then smiles at jack)
JACK
(smiles and wips his face, then laughs alittle)
SNOOKIE
Hold on beautiful, I got a litle of southern comport right in this drawer
(while saying he gets it then hands it to pat)
PAT BENATAR
Okay.. Nice.. Okay cool cats I’m on..
(to jack)
Sexy you wanna come with me?
JACK
Uh
(looks at snookie for the answer)
(snookie gives the okay on his face)
JACK
(to pat)
Yeah
(he gets up and walks out the door)
FADES OUT
FADES IN
EXT. BACK STAGE-NIGHT
PAT BENATAR
Here you have the hit first
JACK
Woah, I can’t
PAT BENATAR
Why?
JACK
I had too much already.. And I feel bad for the tree’s.. oh my gosh, we should do something right now!
PAT BENATAR
His shiz made you like a hippie, you have to smoke this stuff, ummm.. It helps the tree’s?!
JACK
It does?
PAT BENATAR
Yeah, here.
(jack takes a hit really fast)
( the camera goes in a blur and spins in a weird way, the voises are cuft)
PAT BENATAR
Are you okay baby?
JACK
…what?
PAT BENATAR
Are you okay? You have been standing thre for 10 minutes
JACK
I have?
PAT BENATAR
(laughs)
Yes
(she kisses him)
I have to go on stage now
(jack the whole time is like in a trance and stands in the same spot for another 10 minutes)
(the color and spining is only there when it has jack on screen)
COP 1
(at jack)
Why are you back here?
JACK
(his transe breaks)
What?
COP 1
(punch’s jack)
(jack falls, and the screen goes to black)
FADES TO BLACK
FADES IN TO A BRIGHT LIGHT
JACK
( jack opens his eye’s to Elena and Janis, snookie hovering over him)
(voise over)
The cop beat me up he is bad, him and the other cop killed the girl, please he was the one who beat up tom, please he’s going o killl me, you can get him he‘s here, he punched me and kept kicking---
(out loud)
---What.. Wha.. Cop… bad… me.. Him…the girl
ELENA
Um.. Does any of you know what he said?
SNOOKIE
Not a thing
PAT BENATAR
He said something about a cop… bad me him the girl
ELENA
What did he take?
PAT BENATAR
Too much, we should just leave him alone to think or something, anyways I have to go back on
(she walks to the stage)
ELENA
Maybe we should give him a pen!
SNOOKIE
Yeah lets do that
(they sit him up and give him paper and a pen)
FADES-OUT
FADES IN
(Cuts flash’s of the concert)
(pat benatar is on stage and singing, almost done)
(1 minute of the song is left the song‘ hate my self for loving you‘)
PAT BENATAR
I wanna thank you for the fun time, have fun with the next band!
(she screems then walks off stage to jack)
FADES IN
(jack is asleep)
(pat walks up to jack and see’s he wrote a script)
PAT BENATAR
Holly molly he wrote a script in only 30 minutes
(she holds it up)
(the script says, 21 dope street by jack greens, Kagelynn Isom, prince gery werron)
(her eye’s go wide)
(she sets it back, then leaves)
FADES-OUT
FADES-IN
EXT. CONCERT-NIGHT
(jack catches the rest of the concert, bob marlyn plays after pat. jack is heavy mind tripping he has a revelation of himself on stage playing the star spangled banner at a later date in time)
(bob is playing that song )
INT. CONCERT-NIGHT
(jack makes his way to his friends, with his script in his back pocket)
JACK
I see it man, I see it all.....so clearly now!
STEVEN
see what dude?
JOHNNY
like what space ships
(laughs)
JACK
no man the light I see it I see the light, it's everywhere ,everything, it's love dude! I just didn't recognized it　, it was there all along .
JOHNNY
it's just the light show dude,
(looks at the lasers)
whoa I'm floating like a cloud
(laughs)
STEVEN
(laughs)
like a cloud must be all this pot smoke floating around your head, but what.　
JOHNNY
but what, but what, you're blowing my high man....
STEVEN
and you're blowing fairy smoke outta you're cheesy donkey
(laughs)
(show a donkey and one eye is holding him)
JOHNNY
My donkey has nothing to do with it!
I gotta hunk of chunk for yeah dude smells like limburger
(smiles)
STEVEN
well dude keep floating ....like Mohammad a lil, like a butterfly cause your, your scent is stinging my　eyes
(laughs)
(jack is oblivious to everything around him, a face like his mind is expanding)
JACK
all you needs is love man that’s all you need .dude John Lennon was right on!! he must a seen beyond the material world in to the eye of creation that’s what I think, man. it's like if love was champion then all our troubles would drift　 away like smoke… like clouds.........
STEVEN
ooh man he is high as one eye now, he's talking like you and wasn't I the one who found you hiding in the bushes after you escaped the mental house
(laughs)
JOHNNY
yeah that half way house was full of freaks　but I think dope street is worse
(laughs)
JACK
Oh that reminds me
(he shows them his script)
JOHNNY
What time did you write this?
JACK
A secent ago
JOHNNY
Wow you are also a jenuse
JACK
Wheres Elena?
FADES-OUT
EXT. CONCERT-DAY
CUT-IN
(they all exit the show a sea of bottles, beer cans, blankets, cigarette butts etch.)
STEVEN
say jack?
JACK
What!
STEVEN
seriously what’s　that you said with　falls and stuff? I mean bro what were you talking about?
(jack looks at both then up to a starry sky a meteor　 falls and explodes like fireworks)
(Dyane west who jack saw backstage with the groupies, yells out)　
DYAIN WEST
hey jack it's me Dyane ...　
INT. BACKSTAGE-DAY
(cut to scene of back stage as snookie opens his office door Dyane introduces herself to jack )
DYAIN
Hi, are you in the band baby?
I'm Dyane west maybe you heard of me?
you know the late　Jim Morrison’s (friend)
I was with him that week at the hotel in Hollywood when he died !!
(jack is caught off guard)
JACK
uh huh
I think… well no not really but …hi
(cut back to concert exit scene)
EXT. CONTERT-DAY
DYAIN
Hi, I’m free for the night!!
wanna smoke some dynamite hash?
I got some back at my crib.
JACK
ooh yeah say some dynamite chicken, way raad.
(turns to Steven)
JACK
hey dude take my car, the door key is the blue one, you　guys can crash over again, ok?
JOHNNY
what about Daisey dude?
what if something bad happened ?　
JACK
aah I bet she got hung up on something…or stayed　with her mom and dad. its all cool. I'll be back really soon
FADES-OUT
CUTS-IN
EXT. HOSPITAL-DAY
(show a view of it)
INT. HOSPITAL-DAY
(the camera starts with the bible in the mother’s lap)
(cut to hospital scene with daisey holding a rosemary and kneeling at her fathers bed)
DOCTOR
he had been into a coma for a week now. from his old war wound. the bullet fragment’s took a stab into his heart over time.
DAISEY
I love you daddy I know we’ve been distant lately but I truly wanna　make up for that now, I remember all my birthdays and charismas and every time you took me for ice cream or gave me a kiss and called me daddy’s little girl .......she sobs...........please don't die daddy, we love you mom needs you
(her mother is asleep in a chair bible in her lap)　
DAISEY
just wake up please, please for gods sake don’t die!　
(She kisses his lips,　and sinks her head into his chest)
NURSE
I'm afraid you have to go home now the doctors say there is nothing we can do I 'm so sorry to be the bearer of bad news this is the hardest part of my job miss Johansson
DAISEY
please can we stay a little while longer I'm really scared ....
NURSE
I'm so sorry but it's the rules visiting hours are 3 am to 9 pm I wish I could help.
DAISEY
mother wake up we have to go,
visiting hours are over c’mon lets take you home,
we’ve had a most triumphant day,
let’s stop and get some fast food,
you need to eat and I haven’t eaten all night.
FADES-OUT
SLIDS-IN
EXT. 21 DOPESTREET-DAY
INT. 21 DOPE STREET- DAY
ELENA
I’m telling you the truth, he knows who it is
FULLER
How do you know he didn’t do it?
ELENA
What if I talk to him about it?
FULLER
You cant blow your cover
ELENA
Well what if one of them do it?
FULLER
(to hanson)
Did you see anything?
HANSON
(is seeing birds, fake ones)
Um no I was… not there
FULLER
Pinhall?
PINHALL
What dad?
FULLER
(to pinhall)
What? Have you takein anything?
ELENA
No he just, yeah he thought is was aleav!
FULLER
For that mistake
(to pinhall)
Your blowing your cover today
FADES-OUT
FADE-IN
EXT. SCHOOL-DAY
(show every one going in the school)
INT. HALLWAY-DAY
(jack is still high from the concert, pinhall walks up to jack)
PINHALL
Hey jack!
(the bell rings)
JACK
What?
PINHALL
What do you know about the dead teacher?
(jack looks at him like, why are you asking me this)
JACK
Why?
PINHALL
I need to talk to out side
JACK
I have to get to class
PINHALL
I know, come on
(jack follows him)
CUTS OUT
CUTS IN
EXT. SCHOOL-DAY
JACK
Now, what?
PINHALL
I need to know everything you know about her
JACK
I just know the cops are on it
PINHALL
What do you mean?
JACK
Why do you care?
PINHALL
Well because I’m a cop.. An under cover cop
JACK
Is---
PINHALL
--no
JACK
Why?
PINHALL
Well because I thought it was you that killed her
JACK
(with a discousted face)
What?
PINHALL
So what else do you know, last night you said something about a cop, what was that?
JACK
Cops! I don’t know what your talking about
PINHALL
Oh you know… I can tell you know a lot more then I do
JACK
I have to go
PINHALL
Wait!
JACK
Ask Mr. Stench
PINHALL
Was it him?
(jack walks back in the school)
(yells)
Was it!
CUTS-OUT
FADES-IN
INT. LAB-DAY
(jack walks into the class)
MR. YOUNG
Why are you late
JACK
Well mr young, ‘Couse an under cover cop had to talk to me
(pinhall runs in)
PINHALL
(yells)
Wait, jack!
(poses to see everyone staring at him)
JACK
(yells in his face)
What do you want?
PINHALL
Umm.. You forgot your lunch
JACK
What?
MR. YOUNG
Dug your in this class, take a seat
PINHALL
Um.. No I have to go
MR. YOUNG
What did you say--
(pinhall walks out)
(after a minute)
ELENA
Can I use the bathroom?
FADES-OUT
FADES-IN
INT. HALLWAY-DAY
ELENA
(runs up to pinhall)
Dug what did you find out?
PINHALL
He said something about cop’S, and said to talk to Mr. Stench
ELENA
Okay I got this one
PINHALL
Okay I’m leaving
FADES-OUT
FADES-IN
INT. CLASS-DAY
(Elena walks in mr stench’s room, he has no one in the room)
(the song ET by katty perry plays in the back, mr stench is siting)
MR. STENCH
Can I help you--
ELENA
Daisey, and yeah you can
(she walks up to him close)
Do you like it on top or bottom?
MR. STENCH
Umm.. Are you a student here miss--
ELENA
Its daisey
MR. STENCH
Um.. Some one told me about you, don’t I have you in my class?
ELENA
Yes, but I am 21
(she shows him her ID, she cover’s the name)
MR. STENCH
Yeah, he told me that you’re a lezbie, why are you flirting with me?
ELENA
Well couse I’m not into guys like him, I’m into guys like you
MR. STENCH
(giggles)
ELENA
(laughs)
That was a bit corny wasn’t it?
MR. STENCH
Yeah a little… so I like my women on top, of the food chain, what about it?
ELENA
Well.. I want to be your top…
(they both laugh)
one more thing
MR. STENCH
What is that?
ELENA
(she knees down and pulls his tie to her face then kiss’s him with passion)
(he pulls away)
(he kiss’s her)
(then he falls on the floor while kissing her)
(she pulls out a knife, and cuts his shirt open)
(there under the desk and his paints are almost all the way off)
(there are high heels in the back)
(when she puts the knife to his neck)
ELENA
Now your gonna tell me something, and your going to tell me now
MR. STENCH
(with a with a pleased look, he smiles)
What?
ELENA
What happened to that girl teacher that died, who was it, was it you?
MR. STENCH
(looking even more weird)
Me? No… why do you want to know?
ELENA
I just do
(she looks at his body, she‘s trying not to)
MR. STENCH
(try’s to kiss her)
ELENA
(Cuts him alittle)
MR. STENCH
(screams a little)
ELENA
(kiss’s him out of uncontrollable strength)
(they roll a little)
MR. STENCH
I will tell you if you kiss me with more passion
ELENA
(kiss’s him like she has never kissed any one before, and he fills her up, it last‘s for 5 sec)
Now who was it?
MR. STENCH
Your fast in the head, I like it, jack knows I told him I would not say, and they might kill him--
ELENA
What, are you sure?
MR. STENCH
That calls for you to let go of the knife
ELENA
(she reles’es him)
When?
MR. STENCH
On the 31st
ELENA
that’s less then a week?
MR. STENCH
He saw the whole thing happen too… well this was a great meeting
(giggles)
ELENA
(laughs a little)
Well… you can not tell people about this meeting, if you do I will tell them where you hide your pot
MR. STENCH
How do you know about that?
(Elena get’s up and walks out the door, mr. stench is sitting on the floor still)
MR. STENCH
Wow, she’s a hottie, ouch
FADES-OUT
CUTS-IN
INT. HALLWAY-DAY
(Elena close’s the door, pinhall is standing by the door)
PINHALL
Well?
ELENA
We have until the 31st
PINHALL
For what?
ELENA
Untell he gets killed by the people who killed the girl
PINHALL
Are you sure? How do you know he’s telling the truth
ELENA
Well you’ll have to find out
PINHALL
What?
CUTS OUT
CUTS-IN
(its after lunch, to show it the time is shown)
INT. CLASSROOM-DAY
MR. STENCH
(he has just a jacket on)
So how is everyone doing? Jack how was your weekend?
(smiles)
JACK
Well it was real good, hey why are you wearing just that?
MR. STENCH
(he looks at Elena)
Because my shirt got cut
JACK
(jack looks at Elena)
What--
MR. STENCH
--moving on
JACK
Hey why if your cool, why do you act like a dick?
MR. STENCH
Its my cover
(every one laughs)
(the inetcome comes on)
INTER
Hey everyone, there is a football game to night, and at the end of this week is the big talent show, the winers will be getting 10,000 dollars, and to see it is 10 dollars…if your going to try out you better sign up, your teacher has the sheet’s… that is all for today
MR. STENCH
Jack you need to sign up, here
(he hands it to him)
KID 2
Can I sign up?
MR. STENCH
(yells)
No
KID 2
What?
(jack hands it to kid 2)
KID 2
Thanks
MANSON
Hey let me see that?
MR. STENCH
(yells)
Why do you want to sign up?
MANSON
(screams)
The hell I can, give me the paper!
(everyone is shocked)
MANSON
(stands up and almost rips the paper and signs his name in big letters)
(then he slams it down on mr stench’s desk)
MR. STENCH
Wow.. Well we are going to talk about the talent show…
(looks at manson)
What do you plan to do?
MANSON
Well there is this song I made up… dope show
JACK
tonight is going to be a jail break, the song
MR. STENCH
Thats a good one
JACK
Thanks?!
(makes a waxked out face)
MR. STENCH
Well so everyone knows it’s a long way to the top if you wanna rock n roll, I will tell you that
JACK
How…would you know?
MR. STENCH
Well because … jack, I was in a band that didn’t make it big
JACK
Oh.. Hey what happened to your neck?
MR. STENCH
Well that was included with my shirt
(Elena laughs, she trys to hold it in)
MR. STENCH
Oh you like that joke? Oh well maybe I should become a comedian in-stend of a dam teacher
ELENA
(She gets real upset)
MR. STENCH
Oh babay don’t get upset over that… I was just kinding, I like this it was the HO…ttes..
(he looks around the room to see everyone is staring at him)
JACK
Umm.. Did you say the hottest?
MR. STENCH
Yes I did, I burned my self
JACK
Can I speak to you out side?
MR. STENCH
Yeah anything for your learning
(he and jack go out side the door)
FADES-OUT
FADES-IN
INT. HALLWAY-DAY
JACK
(grabs mr. stench by the neck)
Did you have a relationship with my girl?
MR. STENCH
(pulls his hands off his neck)
No I didn’t, she cut me though
JACK
(grabs his jacket and slams mr. stench on the wall)
What happened?
MR. STENCH
She just, cut me then went
JACK
you say my girlfriend has the hots.. For.. You?
MR. STENCH
Eww
(starts to get mad)
You think I would do that to you on purpose?
JACK
well..
MR. STENCH
(yells)
No
(normal)
Well then you need to chill out, and you better practice for the talent show, or your going to get… well you know
JACK
Your right.. Well don’t do anything more.. Okay… like if she trys something… just run
MR. STENCH
(says quitly)
I cant run with heels on
JACK
Wait what did you say?
MR. STENCH
Nothing
JACK
No really did you say something?
MR. STENCH
No
JACK
Really, because it sounded as you said something with heels
MR. STENCH
No I said nothing
JACK
Are you sure you didn’t say anything?
MR. STENCH
I’m sure
(jack goes back in, the camera slowly moves down to shows that mr. stench is wearing black high heels)
FADES-OUT
FADES-IN
EXT. 21STREET-DAY
(view of the place)
INT. 21STREET-DAY
FULLER
You did what to who?
ELENA
Well you should be happy that we are almost done, I just need to get jack to tell me
FULLER
Your off the case
ELENA
What no you can not do that, I found out when we need to get the answer, he might tell me anyways.. Its coming close
HANSON
that’s what she said
(laughs)
ELENA
(rolls her eye’s)
Com on, please we are almost there
HANSON
that’s what she said
(laughs biger)
FULLER
(to hanson)
You are off if you don’t stop
HANSON
(stops laughing)
FULLER
(to Elena)
You have untell Friday
ELENA
Well I have till that long anyways
(laughs)
FADES-OUT
FADES-IN
EXT. SIDE WALK-DAY
Scan of there it is, the same as jacks)
INT. SIDE WALK-DAY
(two lovers are walking and a car speeds by and shoots jake,
(jake falls and is needing help he is bleeding)
(the girl screams and runs to jake)
GIRL 2
(yells)
Jake!!…goodbye jake
(she cry’s)
JAKE
I’m ..I’m still okay, all I need you to do is get me some help
(girl 2 covers jake’s mouth with her hand)
GIRL 2
Shhhh shh shh… no talking.. Its your time to die
JAKE
(Jake gets up and uncovers his mouth and yells)
What! Are you flackin kidding me?! Go get some dam help!
GIRL 2
No jake its your time.. All we can do is cry together…and listen to our last…song together
(she takes out her I pod and plays my immortal by Evanescence)
this will be our last song together
(she cries)
JAKE
(yells)
hey I’m not dead yet! Go get some feaking help! And turn off that damn music!
GIRL 2
(Whispers)
goodbye my love...
JAKE
Oh come on just get some help
GIRL 2
(she covers his eye)
Bye my beautiful love, till the next life, we shall meet again
(she walks away)
JAKE
don’t leave me to die, I will never be with you again
(the camera backs off of jake and goes to jack getting arrested)
JACK
Why are you arresting me?
LIL COP
Well because you killed some one
JACK
Its tusday.. Its not the 31st yet
LIL COP
(as he is putting jack in the back)
yeah well.. it’s the order’s from top gun
JACK
Wait
(he gets outfor a sec)
LIL COP
isn’t that a movie?
LIL COP
Well it has not been made yet
(he puts him in the car)
(They drive off)
FADES-OUT
FADES-IN
EXT. JAIL-DAY
Show pan of the place
INT. JAIL-DAY
(lil cop walks jack into a empty room)
INT. EMPTY ROOM-DAY
(jack gets set in a chair, locked on the table)
LIL COP
don’t move
(he walks out)
JACK
(try to get out, he cant)
(pinhall walks in the room and sits in the other seat across the table)
JACK
(with evil)
You drity pig why would you do this?
PINHALL
You got brought here by gery barny
JACK
Who’s that?
PINHALL
He’s the slim bag who beat up tom
JACK
(esed up more)
Whats going on?
PINHALL
Well we think it was him.. Or you, but mostly think its him, now we need the proof but you’re the only one who can get it
JACK
So how am I supose to get the proof?
PINHALL
Well..
FADES-OUT
CUT-IN
JACK
(to pinhall, yells)
It was all me I killed her, she found my pot
(the camera backs out the room, and you can see gery hearing the convo)
COP 1
(he busts in the empty room)
What is going on here?
(he walks up to pinhall and puts a hand on his shoulder)
(to jack)
Why are you yelling at my new partner?
JACK
Partner?
COP 1
Yes, my other one could not keep his mounth shut.. Pinhall beat him up alittle befor you leave
PINHALL
You got it
(smiles)
JACK
(scared)
(the camera follows cop 1 out the door, the door is shut and all you can hear is some one getting beat up to the point of close death)
COP 1
that’s what I’m talking about
(smiles then laughs alittle)
FADES-OUT
FADES-IN
INT. COUCH-DAY
(jack runs in stench’s hose to find that stench is half naked looking like a women, stench is pulling up pantyhose with his foot on a chair, he is wearing londeray)
JACK
Um… Oh my gosh
MR. STENCH
Umm.. It not what it looks like
JACK
Then what is it?
MR. STENCH
Umm.. I like to dress like a women!
JACK
It is exactly what I thought
MR. STENCH
Oh really?
JACK
Yeah?! What did you think I thought?
MR. STENCH
Oh that you thought I was into guys or something
JACK
Well I did untill you said that
(smiles)
So…
MR. STENCH
So what?
JACK
Do you buy the cloths or..?
MR. STENCH
(smiles yet giggles too)
that’s relevant…Why are you here?
JACK
Well um I need your help… more then ever now that you can look like a dam good women
MR. STENCH
(laughs)
(jack smiles)
FADES-OUT
FADES-IN
INT. LUNCH SCHOOL-DAY
(Elena is dressed in a rockerish look and hanson like a rocker all the way, they are inline for food)
ELENA
Tom have you seen jack, its been two days and I need to get the info
HANSON
No I haven’t, have you seen dug?
(they are looking for a seat)
ELENA
No not once.. You don’t think he…?
(they sit down)
HANSON
No he wouldn’t.. lets go to his house tonight
ELENA
Okay
HANSON
Hey did you know that cheese, the thing that your about to eat is just moldy milk
ELENA
What?
HANSON
Yeah!
ELENA
You just laid me off my diat
HANSON
(laughs)
What?
ELENA
Now I cant eat my food
(giggles)
CUTS-OUT
CUTS-IN
EXT. HOUSE-NIGHT
(show Elena and hanson going in jacks house)
INT. HOUSE-NIGHT
(Elena walks in first then hanson)
ELENA
Holly cow it’s a big mess
HANSON
Yeah no kidding
(there is papers everywhere jack is under the big pile or tent of papers on the couch, he moves)
HANSON
(pulls out his gun)
(jack gets up, but he does not see the gun)
(hanson puts his gun away fast)
ELENA
Jack? Are you okay
(she runs to him)
JACK
Um yeah
(jack has a buse’s all over him)
ELENA
Oh my gosh, what happen to you?
HANSON
Who did this to you?
JACK
Um dug pinhall did this, thank god he did
HANSON
What?
ELENA
What why did he beat you up?
JACK
Wait what, oh it only… never min--its arelavent
ELENA
(to jack)
What, whats going on?
JACK
It’s a cover as stench says
HANSON
Is pinhall with you?
JACK
Um no but (she) is
(stench jumps up, he is dressed like a women)
HANSON
(to jack)
wow, who’s that hottie?
(waves to stench and makes a kiss to him)
JACK
My mother
ELENA
Your mother!
JACK
My fake mother!
HANSON
Why is she your fake mother.. Who is that?
JACK
That.. Is my teacher… mr. stench
ELENA
Oh my gosh
(straight face, then gigles)
(hanson pucks)
MR. STENCH
Hi..(daisey)
ELENA
(laughs a little)
Why do you have a fake, fake… --why is he being your mother?
JACK
--mummm…Wait why did he call you daisy?
(to stench)
why would you call her daisey?
MR. STENCH
(to jack)
Umm I don’t--
(fake smiles)
ELENA
(to jack)
Tell me!
JACK
(fast)
Well because I’m 23 and I needed to keep the cops away.. Sorry Elena, I’m to old for you
ELENA
Its okay I’m 21
JACK
What?
(smiles)
(Helena smiles)
HANSON
So what have you been doing for the past 2 days?
ELENA
Yeah!
JACK
(jack lies down on the papers)
Well I have been writeing this
(he holds up his script, straght up)
ELENA
What is it?
MR. STENCH
Its to show who’s boss
(stench sits on the couch)
ELENA
What?
JACK
Come sit, let me tell you everything
(they go sit)
FADES-OUT
FADES-IN
EXT. 21STREET-DAY
(view of the place)
INT. 21STREET-DAY
(start up with the words ‘21 dope street’ then back up and show that it’s a cover of a script)
FULLER
(to Elena on a walkie talkie)
So do you have everything ready?
INT. TALENT SHOW-DAY
(start up on the talkie, then back up to mid shot)
ELENA
(in a talkie)
Yes sir
(camera back’s up to long shot and show everyone is finding there seats)
(The lights turn off and the stage goes dark)
RYIN
Ladies and germs, I give you the judges of this contest
Theadore, simen, and alven
(they three stand up and bow to the cround)
(the cround goes wild)
First up is Maryland Manson
MANSON
(walks out on stage, does a rock sighn and everyone cheers)
CUTS-OUT
INT. TICKIT BOOTH-DAY
(bob marlyn buys a ticket)
INT. TALENT SHOW-DAY
MANSON
(he is playing the song ‘dope show’)
INT. TICKIT BOOTH-DAY
(pat benatar buys a tickit)
INT. TALENT SHOW-DAY
(show the song in the weird parts)
INT. TICKIT BOOTH-DAY
(jack and johnny, stevn, Andrew and stench runs up to the tickitbooth)
JACK
Hey I’m a band!
TICKITER
Number please?
JACK
5545!
TICKITER
Okay go on it
INT. TALENT SHOW-DAY
(show the end of manson’s song)
RYIN
(walks out on stage)
Thank you that was very good. Now he have…
(pulls out the paper)
Jb and kg?!
(cage and fake guy walks on stage)
FAKE OFFICE GUY
Are you ready to rock?
(no one makes a sound)
FAKE OFFICE GUY
Umm..
(yells)
Okay…one two three… go
(they play ‘wonder boy’)
INT. SIDE STAGE-DAY
Jack okay dudes we need to get ready
(they get jackets on and spike there hair more)
(48 sec of the song then its over)
INT. JUDGE’S VEIW-DAY
ALVIN
Um sir.. Do you even go to this school?
INT. TALENT SHOW-DAY
FAKE OFFICE GUY
(laughs like the dudes crazy)
(yells)
Run cage
(they run like cops are coming)
(ryin shows up on stage)
RYIN
Well that was… to say.. Weird!
(people laugh)
Next up is jack greens and his band!
(jack runs out with johnny, steven and Andrew)
JACK
This is a song for what has been going on in my life
(the whole song ‘jailbreak’ is played threw the court)
(40 sec’s into the song)
EXT. COURT-DAY
Scan of the time and day
Saying (Friday 4;20 pm, earlier today)
INT. COURT-DAY
LIL COP
All rise
JUDGE
(he walks in and sits down)
(pihnall is siting next to pinhall and Elena and with jack, stench is watching)
PINHALL
Your judge I place gery to stand
INT. TALENT SHOW-DAY
(jack and the dudes are playing the song and jack rips the shirt in half)
(the girls screm)
INT. COURT-DAY
(cop 2 is sitting in the witness chair)
PINHALL
(to gery)
Is it true you told me to beat jack up?
(jack is breathing deep)
COP 2
What?
PINHALL
Is it true you would beat up jack just because?
COP 2
Well.. Um
PIHNHALL
(yells)
Is it true you put my partner, tom hanson in the hospital?
INT. TALENT SHOW-DAY
(show Johnny playing the guitar)
(jack looks in the crowd and see’s stench and all his friends cheering for them)
INT. COURT-DAY
COP 2
Well it was not me.. Well I did, but I had order’s!
(cop 1’s loywer yells)
COPS L
I object
(jack is getting mad)
JUDGE
Under what Secom stance’s?
COPS L
Sir this is completely nascence
(people start to yell, jack screams)
(judge bangs his hammer)
JUDGE
Order in this court, order
(people are not even talkin)
Pinhall, you may continue
PINHALL
Thank you sir
Where you and gery at the school at that time?
COP 2
Yes
PINHALL
And did he tell you to grab her?
COP 2
Yes he did bbu--
PINHALL
And what about jack? Did you two trap this boy in this?
COP 2
(very solfty)
Yes
PINHALL
What was that?
(jack fastly sits up in surprised that to find he told him yes, with an amased face)
COP 2
(yells in pinhlls face)
(fast)
Yes, yes we did but it was all gerys idea.. To kill her to hurt jack, and even to hurt tom, I had nothing to do with anything else that he did
JACK
Oh my gosh
(smiles)
PINHALL
No further more
INT. TALENT SHOW-DAY
(jack in behind bar’s, then the dudes break him out)
( 2:17minutes in the song)
(they show all hell loose, at the talent)
(with that break out, at the same time cop 1 and 2 is being put in handcuffs)
(show in flash’s back and forth with the two scenes)
(up tell 249, it shows the court room flooded with cops and cop 1 trying to run)
(they throw him in the cop car)
INT. TALENT SHOW-DAY
(they play the rest of the song starting from 249)
(at 325, jack looks at Elena and pulls her up on stage at 328)
(every one is jumping up on stage and dancing and screaming the song)
(at the end everyone cheer’s)
FADE-OUT
EXT. COURT-DAY
JACK
(is walking out the court with stench and pinhall, Elena, and hanson)
I wanna thank you guys, so much for what you helped me do,
and thank you so much stench
FADES-OUT
FADES-IN
INT. TALENT SHOW-DAY
(everyone is still cheering)
(jack runs to Elena and stench)
JACK
(stench)
Thank you so much
(he kisses stench on the cheak, then French’s Elena)
(jack walks to seven, johnny, Andrew to hear the winers)
RYIN
Well we sure have a a winner, and that winner is ..
(he opens the envelop)
The number is 5545... that’s Andrew, Steven, Johnny and jack!
(everyone cheer’s)
(jack kisses Elena again)
Jack
I love you Elena!
ELENA
I love you too jack
(they smile together)
(close up on everyone smiling)
(the end credits show up)
(the camera back’s out of the movie and the movie theater, people are claping)
INT. THEATER-NIGHT
(jack greens and Elena, stench, pinhall, hanson, fuller, johnny, stenven, Andrew, cop 1 and dasiey, walk out of the theater)
JACK
Wow that was really good
ELENA
Yeah no kiding, that kagelynn isom did an amasing job
JACK
Yeah that Jack greens did good!
MR.STENCH
didn’t johnny depp help out too?
ELENA
Um, hell no.. he just produced it, I think! wow all this talking about pot.
JACK
Yeah… who wants to go smoke a bowl?
HANSON
I do!
PINHALL
Same here
ELENA
Hell yeah
MR. STENCH
(is in womens dress)
Sure
ELENA
(to stench)
What in the hell.. How did you change so fast?
MR. STENCH
Well.. Its just a movie, how should I know, I’m just an actor, I do what I get told to
(smiles)
ELENA
I think it was kinda half fast
DAISEY
It was the shit
HANSON
(mad)
You think its shit?
DAISEY
No, I thing it was THE shit… I loved it!
PINHALL
Yeah it is pretty rade
JACK
Yeah, lets go smoke
(they go off, the camera shows someone eles)
SAADE
Wow that was real good
JOHNNY
Yeah I know, but it was just a movie saade
SAADE
What are you talking about, that was not a movie!
JOHNNY
Umm… okay, then what was it?
SAADE
That was reality
(saade runs up to the screen and sticks his tungh out and it poses)
(The end credits show up)
(the camera back’s out of the movie and the movie theater again, people are claping)
INT. THEATER-NIGHT
JACK
Wow that was an interesting ending
ELENA
You don’t say
(the camera back’s out of the movie and the movie theater again, people are claping)
INT. THEATER-NIGHT
ELENA
What the hell is happening
(the camera back’s out of the movie and the movie theater again, people are claping)
INT. THEATER-NIGHT
ELENA
Why are we on a repeat?
JACK
I don’t kno--
(the camera back’s out of the movie and the movie theater again, people are claping)
INT. THEATER-NIGHT
JACK
-ow
ELENA
(yells)
Fuuuu
(the camera back’s out of the movie and the movie theater again, people are claping)
INT. THEATER-NIGHT
ELENA
(yells)
Uuck
This is too trippy
(the camera back’s out of the movie and the movie theater again, people are claping)
INT. THEATER-NIGHT
JACK
No kidding
ELENA
Slap me?
(the camera back’s out of the movie and the movie theater again, people are claping)
INT. THEATER-NIGHT
JACK
Why?
ELENA
Just do it
(the camera back’s out of the movie and the movie theater again, people are claping)
INT. THEATER-NIGHT
(jack slaps Elena really hard)
INT. HOUSE-DAY
(jack jumps up and see’s Elena sleeping next to him and she wakes up)
Elena
Oh my gosh that was too trippy
JACK
The movie thing?
ELENA
Yeah
(laughs)
I love you
JACK
I love you too
(he kisse’s her)
(stench gets up and he’s dressed like a women, jack see’s him)
JACK
…Really?
MR. STENCH
What? Its spirit week! Today’s cross-dress day
JACK
(laughs)
(then lyes back down with Elena on the floor with the sun shining on them)
FADES INTO THE SUN
　
　
　
FADES-OUT FADES-IN
JACK- HANSON- PINHALL- JOHNNY- ELENA- COP 2- COP 1-
BOB MARLY-
MR.STENCH - ANDREW- STEVEN- FULLER- RYIN- BLOWFISH- FAKE OFFICE GUY- JUDGE 1- JUDGE 2- RANDOM TEACHER- UNDERCOVER- TEACHER- JASON- DOCTOR- BOBBY- DRUGY- TEACHER- NICK- LISA- RUZE- JUNKYER- DAISEY- SNOOKIE- PAT BENATAR- BILL-
INT. OFFICE-DAY EXT. ALLEY-DAY EXT. SCHOOL-DAY
INT. SCHOOL-DAY INT. HALLWAY-DAY INT. OFFICE-DAY-2
EXT. CLUB-DAY EXT. PHONE-DAY INT. CAR-DAY
EXT. CAR-DAY EXT. HOUSE-DAY INT. HOUSE-DAY　
EXT. ROOM-DAY INT. ROOM-DAY INT. BACK STAGE-DAY
EXT. P.E-DAY INT.CLASSROOM-DAY INT. J-HOUSE-DAY
EXT. J HOUSE-DAY EXT. DOCTOR-DAY INT. DOCTOR-DAY
INT. BAR-DAY INT. 21STREET-DAY EXT. 21STREET-DAY
JACK
Are you guys ready to rock
JUGE 1
Um I am not ready to hear some crap
JUGE 2
No
JACK
give us one change to rock your socks off, man
JUGE 1
Fine
JACK
Life gets a little harder, every time you smile
(the song round and round from ratt)
xjzgzdem6hlw@m.youtube.com
A young guy from blow, young’s dad JACK-JIM STERGESS
A young Johnny Depp HANSON-
A young pinhall PINHALL-
has a burnt eye, 3rd degree JOHNNY-
ELENA- Kagelynn Isom
Ps the camera will be from the late 80’s
Get marylin manson as a geek at jacks school
JACK-jim stergess HANSON- PINHALL- JOHNNY- ELENA- Kagelynn Isom
COP 2- COP 1-
MR.STENCH -Johnny Depp ANDREW- STEVEN- FULLER- RYIN- Robert BLOWFISH- JUGE 1- JUGE 2- JUGE 3- RANDOM TEACHER- Angelina Jolie UNDERCOVER- TEACHER- JASON- DOCTOR- BOBBY- DRUGY- Robert TEACHER- NICK- LISA- RUZE- Alyson Sarrano FAKE OFFICE GUY- Jack black
ELENA
I have to go to class I have too
JACK
You can’t your really high
ELENA
No I can walk
(she walks like jack sparrow and Jack looks at her funny)
Was I walking weird?
JACK
Yeah you were!.. You really can’t go now
(The concert)
Story
Jack and all his friends with tom and dung go to a concert and they met a kinda oddly women named Dyane and she tells them all sorts of cool facts about concerts and how to sneak back and allsorts, p.s. make this at the end up to 5 to 8 minutes long
　
Need to add part for Megan fox or she can play
Ps we can use very old song, the 80’s will work make ryin had a conectshon with the dead teacher
Ps have jack have a ghost move his red cloth off the table and be in a shape of a dick, and his saying will be, that’s my ghostly image
　
　
　

 

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