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This book was interesting and you did a good job with the grammar and punctuation. However I do have to wonder why you put - in between words sometimes and then not other times? Also you used the word 'emo' alot in this book. This could offend some people and it may be best to change it to emotional, cutter, or depressed. For instance when he runs into the kid in the hallway and he asks if he cuts and the... mehr anzeigen
BLACK TEARS:
This book was interesting and you did a good job with the grammar and punctuation. However I do have to wonder why you put - in between words sometimes and then not other times? Also you used the word 'emo' alot in this book. This could offend some people and it may be best to change it to emotional, cutter, or depressed. For instance when he runs into the kid in the hallway and he asks if he cuts and the character replies with, "Yeah. I'm emo." It may be best to just leave it as "Yes, I do." or something else.
Over all this story has great concept. Great job! (:
Stars: 4.5 out of 5. Recommend? Yes. I would recommend this. (:
I'm not sure if this is my book you're talking about, but I greatly apologize if I offended you. This is supposed to take place in times where insults and labels are used quite often and are not very apologetic about it. Whereas, it's supposed to be extreme and rude. But not to... mehr anzeigen
I'm not sure if this is my book you're talking about, but I greatly apologize if I offended you. This is supposed to take place in times where insults and labels are used quite often and are not very apologetic about it. Whereas, it's supposed to be extreme and rude. But not to readers. I'm sorry if I offended anybody. If you wish me to take it down, I will.
No no, darling, don't take it down. It is a very good book. I love the story line to it, I'm just saying that it is best to use other words instead of reusing them again and again. Keep the story up, though, for it is a great piece of work! (:
Can you critique my book, Black Tears? I added it to your booklist and I want to know what you think about it and if I should change anything. Thank you! :D
This book was fairly interesting but it still was missing a few periods. Just cross your t's and dot your i's already! But it was interesting. The concept was new and not something you read about everyday. I would give this book 4 out of 5 stars because it brought a new way to process books and it was very detailed. But there were a few punctuation and spelling which can be checked by an editor. I do like that you put a... mehr anzeigen
This book was fairly interesting but it still was missing a few periods. Just cross your t's and dot your i's already! But it was interesting. The concept was new and not something you read about everyday. I would give this book 4 out of 5 stars because it brought a new way to process books and it was very detailed. But there were a few punctuation and spelling which can be checked by an editor. I do like that you put a prologue, for they give a lot of information that you need to know, but it was long and usually the Prologue just has stuff in the past, ya know? But you made it seem like it was caught up with your character already.
Okay so this book was alright but I have to say that I wasn't too impressed. There were a lot of sentences that didn't even have punctuation! You need someone to go through and edit the story and show you places you went wrong at. Plus, another thing is that the Prologue was like Chapter One with just a few words changed... You might want to fix that. Overall I would give this book about 3 out of 5 only because it isn't... mehr anzeigen
Okay so this book was alright but I have to say that I wasn't too impressed. There were a lot of sentences that didn't even have punctuation! You need someone to go through and edit the story and show you places you went wrong at. Plus, another thing is that the Prologue was like Chapter One with just a few words changed... You might want to fix that. Overall I would give this book about 3 out of 5 only because it isn't finished. Once you get the punctuation in and fix the double chapters, I'll be happy to re-critique it for you! But until then finish it.
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I'm not sure if this is my book you're talking about, but I greatly apologize if I offended you. This is supposed to take place in times where insults and labels are used quite often and are not very apologetic about it. Whereas, it's supposed to be extreme and rude. But not to... mehr anzeigen
I'm not sure if this is my book you're talking about, but I greatly apologize if I offended you. This is supposed to take place in times where insults and labels are used quite often and are not very apologetic about it. Whereas, it's supposed to be extreme and rude. But not to readers. I'm sorry if I offended anybody. If you wish me to take it down, I will.
~ Excella Marie Jackson
No no, darling, don't take it down. It is a very good book. I love the story line to it, I'm just saying that it is best to use other words instead of reusing them again and again. Keep the story up, though, for it is a great piece of work! (:
Ok thank you!! ^_^
Of course. (: