BookRix

That story was so sad although it was true....My auant was killed in that that accident and I can never forget what happened that day...For you to write such a beautiful peice means a lot to me and others. Thank You and I hope that you continue to keep writing....your great at it

aww, tht was so sad :( i hope Danny gets better n meets a new gal :( ther was few minor mistakes. like u said 'I' n 'We' a few times, instead of 'Danny' or 'Linda' but thts it :) good story thos. really like it :}

Well written and engaging choice of material. With a bit of spit and polish this could be a fine piece

Good start to what can become a great story....lots of potential there.
A few corrections are due.
I'll pm you.
Laz

i want to read more and more

this is such an amazing book! You should keep writing it and message me when you update! I love all your work! Please keep me updated on everything! I'm hooked!