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great start seems like a good chapter keep writing intersting story
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thanks. This is my first story so please be patient with all the mistakes.
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Great start! Zephra seems like a good character. She has flaws but is whimsical and likeable. There are just a tad few grammar mistakes but nothing that cannot be fixed. I enjoy the connection she shares with Alex very cute. Overall it's an interesting story. Keep it up!
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