Please run the spell checker to fix typos and punctuation issues. Look into the format also. There is a smooth flow in the story and you can write more to make it an interesting read.
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Vert Nice book Yolla, i agree with Alexis you should keep writing i love it so far <3
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I really like this book you should keep on writing. <3.
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Very well thought out! Even if there is some trouble with grammar and structure, it's always good to get those words on paper. Although, I was particularly confused when switching between "u" and "you". I know that "u" was used in the case of texting, but a reference could probably be added, mentioning whether it was a text or not.
You can definitely sense the emotion that's trying to be brought out. And the narration had a... mehr anzeigen
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Thank u so much :) It means alot I will try to work better on the book though :D
Ok i know this is might be weird after sending a friends request and reading your book, but its good you just slipped up on a few places, which was nothing like my first book mine was miss spelled bad punctuation and my first book was horrible, but yours it very good just a few mistakes that can be fixed on a word doc or some site. :P So don't give up on this book cuz its friggen good!!!!
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Thank u Soo much :D Ur words actually made my day ! I will work on the book more then :) any suggestions to make it better ? :D
not too much just reread what you have written and to triple check put it on a word doc, and then you wont be abile to lose it
okay I will :)