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I loved the story it was described very well, it made you feel as if you were at the place, it's a very creative and its just a good book. I didn't really see any faults and I loved the names you used, they were very unique and fitted the story. xoxox
Lauren

This is truly an enchanting tale, with a driving force of Zylena's search for a hidden truth keeping the reader hooked from the start. Would be great to have a follow up to this lovely story.

Yezall, just read your 1st chapter in the begining I was not sure I was going to like but I continued reading now I will be looking for the rest of the book to come out well done
Deb B

Your story has a strong beginning, that hooks the reader. I love how you continue to build the intrigue, and captivate the reader throughout the remainder of the chapter.
I love reading your stories, but this is definitely my favorite so far.
Chris

Well done Yezall, this is a lovely story, I cannot wait to read more, it had me from the start

amazing book

I have to agree with the other comments here. I think the concept is great and with a bit of fine-tuning this could be developed into a terrific longer story. I thought there was a nice balance of narrative and dialogue and the action moved forward at the right pace... definitely want to see where this goes from here.

I have totally changed that scene. I laughed when I read what I had, so unbelievable!

I read Zylena's Element. First let me say that it's subject matter isn't one that attracts my attention for the offset, but I was pleasantly surprised when I found myself engulfed in the story. I give it 5 stars for originality and creativity. It's my hope to get to a point in my writing that I can create a whole world from imagination. Of course, there are a few grammar/spelling things, we all seem to get a snag like that, but over all...keep going with the story. Thanks for the ride and send me a heads up when there is more to read!