Honey Hustle

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Honey Hustle
Honey is known as the good girl. Her sister Diamond is on top of the family hustle. Diamond teaches Honey the game. Honey decides that she is going to be on top of the family hustle which means war against Diamond. But that all changes when she meets the man of her dreams Kane.

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money hustle
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latrice.write

I just read your book, I was a little bit confused. You have a great concept of what you want to write,But at the same time the story moves to fast. For example: Honey was talking to kane on the couch in the living about her sister diamond wanting her to be safe, Then all of a sudden it went to: Soon honey found herself in the kitchen with kane feeding her strawberry's then they fell asleep naked. You have good idea's, But... mehr anzeigen

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OSoUnique

Thxs I will try to go into more details

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