Wichtiger Beitrag
ok thanks. I will take what you said and work with it. You are kind for helping me out.
- Permalink
- Kommentieren
- Kommentare sind geschlossen
Wichtiger Beitrag
I like your subjects in The Feeling. Though, it doesn't really have a rhythmic read to it. It gets confusing. Try to edit it a bit, and make lines end when the part should like this.
I loved him
he never knew me
Which tore me apart
It hurt my friends
It hurt me
It hurt everyone around my soul
I randomly made that up on the spot
- Permalink
- Kommentieren
- Kommentare sind geschlossen