BookRix

More Is begin added to the book =3

I took a look at your book. I don't think you have a problem with ideas for a story, but you do have issues with grammar and spelling. If you want more readers, you need to address that.
I know that you're 14 and it's great that you are into writing. Most kids your age won't even pick up a book to read. My suggestion is to fix your synopsis. It's full of mistakes that will turn away potential readers. Download grammarly. It's free version will correct almost all the problems I found. Let me know when you address this and I will give it another try.

Good luck to you young writer.