your book was good but very short
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the story is great, but you need to add more punctuation signs,
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aweswome
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nice book and a good ending keep writing would like to see what else you got
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i love it so far! You know, I'm going to be honest: the grammer, spelling, and some of the storyline needs a little bit of work, but the story is as interesting as it is creepy. I think it's a really good book, you know. You should make a sequel if you haven't already, or at least make it a little longer. As soon as I was finished, I felt disappointed because there wasn't anymore to read. And yes, the ghost Jason is quite the... mehr anzeigen
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Good idea but even if you were typing fast you need to fix it because you cant rush its been months and im still on my first book!
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sorry i mispelled spme words cause i was typing fast
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nice story line bad spelling tho
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good imagination.. keep writing.. :-)
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you didnt like it why
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