BookRix

Nice use of language, and a well-spun tale. Leaving holes made us think and fill them in as we read, while we were playing with the new perspective on Dracula. Thanks for sharing your imagination with us! C...

I was going say mayself that the there should have been their, two reds where there should only be obe and capitols for names. How did he know to call himself ';vampire'? All the same, it is different and yes, I also agree it could be a much longer sgtory. Worth a try. Evelyn

truth is, ive never been one for grammar, never considered it even and your luck to have gotten full stops ;) no really though, ive always forgotten to put capitals in and as a matter of fact, friends of mne that i got to read this all want me to expand it so im thinking of starting say a year before he came to earth and having Dracula as the main character

I have a question, is your lack of capitalization intentional? The story its self was intriguing. I wanted to read more and I think you should consider expanding this story. Dracula has been done to death but you brought new life to it with this angle. Well done!

for a brilliant read.
Chris

Almost like Clark Kent with fangs. I really like your imaginative take on this one! The story has good tension, and in a very few pages opens up worlds of thought on the Dracula story. Awesome job! (I had a feeling I'd like your story-telling) "D

This was an awesome tale of how Dracula came to be. It certainly is different from all the tales I've heard but it also seems to make some sense :) Wonderful job
~Nina~