beautiful and very very steamy :)
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A delight to read. Fun, and yes, sexy.
nice twist on the old fairy tale.
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I think this story is very good. I like it a lot. I am going to read more of your work. Are you going to add any more to this?
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This story contained many elements. I enjoyed the love scene and thought it was hot. It was sad when Shea was blinded. Yet it was happy when she could see again. The ending was very happy. Nicely done! Best wishes in the contest!
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I had put much effort into making this story a good twist. And coming from you, means a lot. ^_^ Thank you so much.
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