BookRix

I love your poems, it's so touching

I enjoyed these very much, short and sweet poems of free verse was wonderful and the prose were nice. A lovely group as a whole.

These were all very lovely poems. I especially liked the first one since you were able to give very accurate scenarios of what love is. I also really enjoyed "Away", the repetition was very melodic and gave it a structure even though it was a free verse poem.
Please be sure to check a few minor typos though, the one that stood out the most was in the first poem when you continued to use your instead of you're. If you fix that, then this poetry book will be complete. Thank you for recommending this book on the swap thread.
-Angely

Especially loved Wisdom of Life,Talk To Me and Away.Lovely poems! Would you please check out one of my books?Thanks.