Dancing in the Moonlight

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Dancing in the Moonlight
Newlywed Ben has a fantasy. Will his wife play along?

Stichwörter: 
dance, cuckold, honeymoon
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violadelesseps

Only on page 6 of this, but had to stop to tell you "Bravo, darling!" Yours is some of the best writing I've seen by a contemporary man since Will's.

Can't wait to read the rest.

xx

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cumlywench

I enjoyed the tease. A sensual story, tastefully put together. Absolutely delightful.
I loved the little surprise.

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eddieqwist

OMG I fell off the last page ... I did too ... LOL And mumbled .. " You fuck" LOL
I think besides the woman s easy going wildness, I really enjoyed the pace. I normally don't somber threw a story but this time I was relaxed and enjoyed the journey.This was a nice and suprising treat. Thanks so much for sharing it .. :-)

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fuzzymonkey

Very erotic story beautifully told without being pornographic.Builds up nicely against a background of sun, sea and happiness!

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Gelöschter User

I really liked it, i loved the way that you set it out. It was a little small but that is the only critisisum i have, otherwise it was amazing, keep them coming! :D

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