Such powerful drabbles. You really write well. Beautiful and sad.
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good effort!! even though 100 words r too less, Wardha did a great job in gripping the attention and leaving an impact
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"So much left till tomorrow. One tomorrow too late".
Very powerful Wardha!
Robin
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and thank you for ending these tales with love eternal...Paula
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I really like your book design from cover to page layout. The stories are sad. I cannot imagine myself in their shoes. I like the first one because it is a reminder to all that we should learn to cherish every moment in our lives. There is also a lesson to it that we should learn to forgive others before it’s too late. You’ve got my vote!
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Hi Wardha,
Again, the cover art and page design is beautiful.
I like your story ideas. I wish reality were this accepting and calm, prior to death. I hope this is how those victims felt at that moment.
I like your stories and I'm voting. Check your hyphenation with numbers when adjectival.
Bek :)
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Wonderfully written yet so sad. The way you imagine how those final moments could have been spent was as if you were truly there witnessing them. Very well imagined.
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