BookRix

you had but one typo and this is a longer story waiting to be written or is it? And it just needs to make it to the keyboard?

The cover art is intriguing and beautiful; your story as well...Paula

You need to write more. It was too short. It seemed like there was lots more to say and as a result I felt that expectation of more to come. Please continue on with this story. When she lied down on his chest that should have read when she lay down on his chest (spelling error).