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This is a really lovely chapter! I enjoy Mabby's personality quite a bit and hope that she can forgive her mother or the both of them make amends at some point. As for Logan, I kinda wanna learn a little more about him (I'm into the bad guys . . . they're so fun!) There are some spelling and grammar mistakes here and there, and some sentences don't flow right, but those can be fixed. Other than that, I really enjoyed the first chapter, keep up the good work.