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thanks so much. im actually gonna try that out :D. good idea.

i do too, but it was originally written for a 4 page contest. im thinking about writing more of them like kisa said

Its awesome but it could be longer.

this is awesome T i fell in love with will on the 1st page, i wish there was more tho :)

I think it was good, very detailed, and descriptive. I like the fact that he found his mom, but I also think you could make this more than a short story. You can make it a story of their struggling to survive and them in search of a place with actual power. Also since he's deaf you should give him a special love interst which would spice up the story. You should also make a cover that describes the story.

~Kisa~