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A successful story, plot and dialogue. A pleasure to read. Thanks for sharing.

Thank you Dela! This book ties into a manuscript that I completed 99.99% called "Vigilance Squared." I find it easier to have descriptive dialogue between two characters at a time and I'm still working towards improving my multi-character(3 or more) dialogue. God is good! He works on us,with us and for us daily!

I am honored that you enjoy this style and in the future when I get the whole story completed, I would like to share it with you and my other friends.

God bless,

Tyrone

You have always inspired me to copy your writing style of dialogue. It brings to life your characters, which is very important to the overall success of the plot.

We learn a lot about characters from four main angles, the most important being not only what the characters say but also the way it is being said. You handled that aspect very well. You are a master of dialogue. Well done. A very nice read.
- Dela Bobobee

Thank you for your support. I haven't logged into BookRix lately - I even forgot my password...please forgive me for my late responses! I've read you lates collection of stories - each one can be expanded to a well written novel...take care!