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Amazing

i want to tell you it was a great story. im glad he straighten his life out.

interesting concepts

holy crap i couldnt stop reading that! that is an awsome book!

I like the character analysis of your group of friends -- very real and insightful. The motivations all ring true. I'm happy that you saw a way out, but sad for the trajic consequences for your friends. Good read!

Rayanda
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As teens we used to play an equally deadly game. Trying to race a train and several kids were killed in car wrecks. I am glad that you walked away, you walked away a winner.

yes, indeed, make or break, it is a good lesson for youngsters who play dice with their lives. This story should be read in a classroom. Congratulations, Tyrone

sakpongba,
I'm sorry that I didn't respond earlier. What you are saying is the truth. God gave us free will and it's our responsiblity to choose wisely and to do the right thing - even if you're "pressed at all sides" to do the opposite.

God bless and thank you,

Tyrone

That was very real. Keep on writing.

I believe God has a very good reason why He gave mankind a freewill. Self realization. The choice to decide why to be at the right place at the right time with the right people with the right intuition. That is what makes the difference.

Discipline is knowing what to do and doing it at the right time without being told.

The only problem is how to distinguish between the voice of God and the voice our ego called self. It is very remarkable how masterfully the writer captured well this subtle scenario in just a few scanty pages. The ball is still in our court. Just make sure you choose RIGHT.

May God guide and protect us all in every crucial decisions we have to make at every conflicting crossroads. Amen.