renesmee's life book 1

a book about renesmee and her family Von:
renesmee's life book 1
renesmee meets jacob again after 3 long years of being apart. her life is perfect until she relizes life is a lot harder than she thinks.


Dieses Buch ist Teil der Reihe "renensmee's life"
Alle Bücher dieser Reihe:
renesmee's life book 1
a book about renesmee and her family
Kostenlos
Beiträge und Kommentare
Wichtiger Beitrag
KourtneyMaxin

please make a different background. It's a great idea though... I love twilight. I'll still try to read it as is for now.
Thanks

Wichtiger Beitrag
melmmhs94

okay, that was pretty good. i like the plotline, or what ive gotten so far, but i do havea few recommndations to make to make reading easier.
one: paper background. defears is right. colored paper is harder to read so i recommend changing the background to parchment or white plain paper.
two: grammar, spelling and punctuation. the areas listed before need some serious work. I had a hard time keeping up. I also suggest you hit... mehr anzeigen

Wichtiger Beitrag
defears

but remember that colored paper is hard to read off of, at least it wasn't red or brown, keep you spelling in check

Weitere Beiträge anzeigen
Um eine optimale Funktionsweise zu gewährleisten, verwendet unsere Website Cookies. Durch die Nutzung der Website stimmst Du der Verwendung von Cookies zu. Mehr Infos
OK
Top of page
Kein Miniaturbild Entfernen Bitte wähle einen Grund aus Bitte gib die Stelle im Buch an. de de_DE