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Interesting guide book, lol. It's clever and written with a lot of thought behind its premise - good job.

That said, your book could be even better if you would go back to your Word document (the one I hope you copied your book's text from), and run it through spell check. Make the suggested spelling changes and check the few grammar things that will be underlined, edit accordingly, and your book will immediately be raised several notches on the Good Writing scale. For instance, it's "weapon," not "wepon." There are many other spelling errors that unfortunately take away from the overall enjoyment of reading this, and as a writer, you want your readers to be able to enjoy it for the content without getting hung up every few words on glaring spelling errors.

Finally, have someone help you edit this for syntax and style. What I mean is, the use - and proper use - of punctuation, literary organization, redundancies, and continuity/consistency (for example, mention within the book about how/why zombies can't run as a tie-in to the title).

In the end, if you take the time to do these things, I believe you'll have a book that's even more entertaining than it already is, funny, informative, and well worth reading. When that can be said about it, your "reads" will skyrocket way past fifty!

Good luck and please - keep writing.

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~ Judy Colella

More facts::::::::::::
1) the only way to kill a zombie is to damage its brain or cut off its head
2) they all have compromised brains
3) A disease called Yaws can actually make people look like zombies. The disease causes painful, oozing sores on the face, legs, arms, and feet. The painful wounds on the bottoms of the feet sometimes cause a sufferer to walk in a slow, zombie-like shuffle.
4) In the case of a zombie outbreak, generic weapons are always preferable to custom or rare firearms with rarer forms of ammunition
5) In the case of a zombie outbreak, a person’s physical fitness will have a significant influence on a person’s odds of surviving
6) Any wound or damage they receive is permanent
7) Toxic zombies are zombies who have come back to life through radiation, exposure to a virus, or poisonous chemical leaks. These zombies are usually rotting, smell bad, can’t feel pain, and prefer to feed on human flesh. They typically can’t move fast, but they can smell fresh blood and can hear very well
8) you can't drown them
9) get some old people or small child friends, if you need to you can use them as zombie bait
10) Unless these are like 28 days/weeks later zombies, they won't die out, and you'll have to live in a zombie world forever
11) make sure there are no zombies around you... check your surroundings almost every 7 seconds

In a zombie apacolypse don't get loud weapons. That will attract the zombies to you.
I have been thinking of ways to survive a zombie apocalypse since I was four, so I know a lot about zombies.

Bravo! Fixing the spelling errors has made a HUGE difference in the enjoyment factor and readability of your story. I found it hilarious and well-conceived, a story I now feel comfortable recommending to others. Awesome job! Woo-hoo!

Good stuff. Makes one stop and think What if? In light of the Ebola epidemic.

UPDATE IS DONE
u r welcome
got to go hope u enjoy

Loved the book, waiting for the update.

Hmm.. Tbh it cant really be based on "Real" information, we don't particularly know whether Zombies are actually real. But overall it was a bit interesting... Btw the food and Water must not be contaminated by germs.. mostly watch out for blood that could be on the food or water, we don't know what these germs could affect us. So... Yeah :) I hope your not offended in anyway and if you are I'm sorry :(

I thought making a guide incase zombies ever come was a good idea, ur points are really good and thoughtful, your book is really good man :)