This was a lovely story Tonya! It made me wish I was a child again full of imagination and wishes!
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What a lovely, happy, cute story. It made me smile.
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This was a great story and in my genre choice to! As I said on your other book, punctuation needs some help.
I also noticed that I got confused on the magic part. To me, it was just like BAM and suddenly they knew the rings were magic. You should explain and go into detail about how they found out that the rings were magic.
Oh and that's just an idea, you don't have to follow it if you don't want to.
Great story,
Icygem1300
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Yes. I know we all would like to have a Shiny Blue Ring. I am working on a follow-up to this story. Thank you for the comments, compliment and heart.
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I enjoyed this delightful story. It made me feel like a kid again & i wanted a shiny blue ring...
LaJune Marie
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Sorry, I did not answer sooner, but sure you can have a shiny blue ring too. :)
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment on my story. I am glad that you and your granddaughter like it. :)
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Very cool! Now my granddaughter wants a shiny blue ring!
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I appreciate you reading and commenting on my story.
Thank you very much. :)
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