BookRix

Awesome Work. Bravo. __ It was a little sad, but well written.

I really liked this story. The only thing I think you need help with is punctuation. But other than that I liked everything, the word choice and the way you portrayed the different emotions. Awesome!
Icygem1300

Thank you so much for reading, commenting and the heart. Yes. I do believe the memories haunt her sometimes, but life goes on. God is good.

I read that is was a true story. I hope the past , The ghosts from 1970 do not still haunt her, But I have a feeling they do.
The ending was not expected.
A wonderful work. with a sad but true story. wonderful cover.

Thank you so much for reading, commenting and the heart. Definitely a heart wrenching and sad story.

This tore at my heart strings. You told a tragic story very well.

You did a wonderful job, allowing us to see through the eyes of Destiny. At her frightful day at the hands of a monster. In the 70's we just didn't believe they were out there, but there is nothing new in this world.

Sad, that this story plays out in everyday life for so many young girls. You did a nice job with sad, yet true story.

Thank you for taking the time to read, comment and heart my book. It took a lot of strength for me to write this story. I will be writing more about the life of Destiny.

What a touching short story. It made me so angry. I constantly said, "Don't go with him, somethings NOT right" as if Destiny could hear me.

Powerful!!!
LaJune Marie

What a touching short story. It made me so angry. I constantly said, "Don't go with him, somethings NOT right" as if Destiny could hear me.

Powerful!!!
LaJune Marie