BookRix

Wow! It is really amazing what is going on here!!!! Thanks a million for reading "Mum comes..." I really appreciate your kind comments concerning my second short story. Unluckily, I don't think I'm going to continue or to elaborate this story because it is, somehow, finished. I mean, it is the way I see the plot....

Ah, but I've got a new idea , so I guess I'll be start writing another one soon!!!!!!

I'm going to read your books and send you feedback as well!!!!!

Un abrazo !

With your permission I would like to add you as my friend.

Jack

Toni,
As you say you are studying to improve your English and that is a good thing but I'm afraid your writing will lose its flavour and charm. You have away with the words and sentences that are totally original. The narrative flows so easily, the conversations are so natural. It's almost biblical in a way. Your writing can be cleared up here and there, but must be done carefully in order to preserve the originality and flavour of your writing. You got and deserve my vote.Jack

p.s.
I'm going to read your other book.

Hi there !

I'm truly astonished. I don't know what to say, I think this is really amazing. Your comments are incredible, astonishing, very astonishing indeed.

Thanks, now I have to get better, to prove I am capable of writing English without grammar mistakes, trying to use it as natural as my first language which is, in fact, Catalan instead of Spanish ;-)

It is really amazing what is happening to me. Now I have to go back to work, my Xmass holidays are finally over, so I'll try to fix the minor issues asap.

Gràcies a tots ! Sou molt amables !
Gracias a todos! Sois muy amables!
Thank you all! You are so kind!

There is something absolutely enchanting about your descriptive prose! Read half of this...will certainly finish. Bravo!

I have to beg your pardon, because I have to make some corrections - my knowledge of the English language is not THAT good -.

Thank you so much for still reading my short stories !!!!!!

t.