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Almost lyrical. Nice story, good base, you pull it along well. It would be a nice child's story. You do well with the descriptions. I could see the garden, and feel the hope of the little boy. Good Job. Robynn
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This is one that you had already shared with me... I am so proud of you for stepping out and sharing with others! You keep on keeping on brother!
JavaBob
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This is one that you had already shared with me... I am so proud of you for stepping out and sharing with others! You keep on keeping on brother!
JavaBob
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This is one that you had shared with me... I enjoyed it then and I enjoyed it now!
You go brother!
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I am glad you enjoyed the story. That's what it is all about.