omg this is so good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I enjoyed reading it. I hope you will enjoy my books Return To Noria and Modern America just as much as I have enjoyed your work.
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Very good. Some of the most descriptive and mature poetry I've come across on this site. Check out Frightened Boy if you've got time.
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I like mostly "Sweep" and "Trojan horse". I have to understand the rest. It's not my native :) Good work!
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So refreshing thankyou for letting me read these!
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These poems are very clever. You have a great command of the language and seem to pick the perfect word for the rhyme. I enjoyed these a lot, even read a few to my husband. He liked them too. :) Any of these published? If not, you should definitely consider it.
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