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You know you write pretty good. If this is your first try at writing it is well done. I imagine you like to read as well, so I imagine you realize that your book doesn't look like a lot of the others. Basically your structure is not uniform like others. Having all books structured the same makes them easier for readers to understand and enjoy.

1. Breaking your work up into paragraphs helps readers visualize what you are saying without giving them so much information that they become overloaded.

2. Another reason for paragraphs is to separate those who are talking. By putting what they say in separate paragraphs The reader can understand who is talking.

I'd suggest you try practicing these two principles and you will greatly improve your work. I hope you find this helpful and you stick with writing. I think you have talent.

I hoped you enjoyed reading this so far