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I am done, actually, and I didn't notice the switching tenses, I will fix that when I can. Thank you so much.
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Wow, interesting story! Are you done writing it? I'd like to read more if you're not.
Only confusing thing was the ending part of the book and that you sometimes went in-between past and present-tense.
Otherwise, it's a nice story :)
---RbG
By the way, if you'd like, would you read my book A World Invisible To The Wise and give me some feedback? I'd greatly appreciate it if you did :)
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