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I started reading your book and I think it's really good. The heartache and sorrow the main character is going through, but also how she has to grow up and take on her mother's responsibilities - all really interesting for the reader! Great job!

okay thank you! I'll get right on to editing

Hi purplebutterfly, just wanted to say that I love your book! It really conveys the feeling of grief well.

The only problem is the spelling and grammar. As a reader, it's a lot harder to read a book that is full of mistakes. To make the novel more accessible, I suggest that you either go back through and edit it yourself or get a friend to do it (sometimes having an objective opinion really helps).

Keep writing!

raindropsonarose