BookRix

Okay Storyteller, you can't just leave everyone hanging like this. "If I had a Heart", must be completed asap. I feel like I am watching a Television episode of Batman when I was a kid and then it ends with the familiar, "To Be Continued, Same Bat Time, Same Bat Station, Next week". If you are telling the story you have to finish it......Please........

I finished your book and am waiting for more. You have a very good descriptive way of writing. Serena

Jennifer, I'm so happy you liked it. I'll let you know about the second part.

You wrote a very good story, although I must admit it did end rather abruptly. I would have liked to have seen more than the startling conclusion.

Aside from some grammatical errors (you should go through the story again to fix them), you did a fine job of building up suspense and painting a picture of a very cold, stormy night, fraught with tension. Well done.

thank you for your comment and the star. I'm so glad you liked it.

Loved your descriptions - great story!