Plz update
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Not enough to know if it good or not.
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I did enjoy your book however I think it would pay of if you had some one to edit it for you. It has great potential and wow inst veronica mean XD I mean calling her cousins retards... so harsh. XD Mind you I call my cousins retards to there face so you know. I cant really complain XD. Also it did seem a little rushed... But that relates to what I said earlier. Have some one read through it. Get them to edit it and such XD.... mehr anzeigen
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Your book has potential. What a great way to start off your book with drama packed plots. With a few editing you should be fine.
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