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this story is really cool! i like it! oh! and btw i'd recognize my bro's artwork anywhere! he did a really nice job on ur cover!
p.s.
dont forget 2 change the image thing. it says u got it from google. ;)

Very good!
I love it...~(*.*)~

I like the final cover - it would be super cool if you could make the background around her into something darker - like black swirling with blue... or something like that. It would be really dramatic. :)

Wow I like where this is going. Really awesome story u got going. Oh and btw the cover looks
really cool.

haha LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!! POLCE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!! tell me when you do!!!!!!

Cool story!

You've got the bases for a very creative and entertaining story. My only critique would be to start new paragraph for every person speaking. You've got good descriptions of the characters, though I feel they are a bit blunt or perhaps a better word is rushed. I do like the fact the story begins the way it does with the character being thrown into a"action" There were no grammar misspelling that caught my eye as I read but I've learned to overlook most while I'm reading. The all caps could have been taken out since the sentences end with "!" but I know some prefer it so that's not really a bad thing. Overall you've got a very unique way of writing that I like and hope to see where the story goes. -I'll email you with my spoiler critique so I don't ruin the story for anyone :) -
~Nina~

Thank you love! it means alot:)

Such a wonderful book this is, full of images...love the style of writing...way to go nerdybird!