BookRix

intesting?!?

were truly horror as I must conclude from your title neither one was going to have a hero/heroine triumph in the end. The third being a natural disaster - well that's a toss up - stand and gape or spring into action and get out of the path.

Good job with evoking the response I think you are looking to get...Paula

I really enjoyed your stories. You did a good job at making a story out of so few words. Keep up the good work!

scarry...you got my vote....Laz

I liked the concept behind all of your stories. Your first one is the most complex, since it's so intentionally vague--is daddy the hero or villain? I agree with the comment about reviewing your work and fixing the grammatical and/or spelling errors.
Good luck!
Rue

You've got my vote! Good luck!

You have a good concept for your stories. Enjoy and continue to write . . . Good luck!