Amazing story,one of the best I've read yet! It made my eyes leak but I was happy they were together x
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Thank you very much! I wish I could get more readers.
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I like it,this is trully hard core.
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Just read your story. Loved the ending. That was really well done and easy to picture.
If you're alright with it, I wanted to give you a bit of advice. Actually, if you aren't okay with it, I'm still going to end up giving you advice. Now...before I piss you off, I'm not claiming to be a better writer or anything at all. Just wanted to help.
I think you could probably take a few things out of this story to shorten it and keep... mehr anzeigen
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Don't worry about. No offense is taken. I actually love the critique. I wrote this story about two years back, so my writing skills have advanced over time. I absolutely agree with you though. Adverbs, as I have come to find out while writing my current book, are a huge help.... mehr anzeigen
I completely agree it might not be traditional but that's what makes it so uneek. Its a wonderful ending and i beat you will never find one like it and yes i cried to but it made me smile that they were together in the end.
(p.s. you should write more you have an amazing talent)
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I do continue to write. I have a couple of other stories in the works. I'm thinking about posting them on here, but I want to make sure that they're good enough for people to read.
Hey there! Because of your great input last time, I have posted up another story and I was wondering if you would read it. It's called "Snow." Tell me what you think. In my personal opinion, it's not as great as "The End of the World", but there are still elements here and there... mehr anzeigen
OMG THAT WAS AMAZING!!!!! that was so emotional at the end.
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Thank you! I loved the ending as well and I tried to make both sad and happy at the end. The first couple of times that I read it to myself I cried and it's my own story. I mean, both characters were going to be together, what's not happy about that, right? Maybe not in the... mehr anzeigen